Good... "Do they draw their fates as well?" I like that line.

excellent. very, very good. this is one of the best fics i've ever read.

Not bad. I'm not fond of the rhythm, but it's not like I have a right to say that since half of my poetry is done without any rhythm at all, ne?
Some minor mispellings, and a bit odd on some of the descriptive lines, but maybe I'm a perfectionist.

*shocked* Do you not believe Yami Bakura will back up his words?!

"You may have defeated me here, but remember... I WILL be back... and I WILL kill you... because I AM the Darkness..."

XD

Best quote ever!

GIR:Kool poem.

Death Angel:I wrote a poem like this, but it's alot diffrent. Your work moves me. Sometimes it confuses me. I love your stuff.

GIR:Me to!

very kewl it definatly tells a lot

Interesting o.o

Yay, your account was unblocked! ^_^ As I said before, this is good. All escapes of reality (well, lots of them anyway) are good!
And Yami Bakura will be back in season 4! Because he sealed part of himself into Yugi's Puzzle.