 Nana25 2009-09-13 . chapter 3cant wait 4 the next chapter |
 seeleyswifey 2008-03-07 . chapter 3Awesome love it you should continue |
 Psycho Slayer ttm 2006-10-13 . chapter 3a pretty good story. in response to your question, depends on how long you want this story to be. if you want them to meet soon and convince her to go home, it would take one chapter to find her and maybe ten to convince her to come home. if angel is cautious, it would take longer, first to get to know her, then to have some sort of relationship, friends or otherwise, slowly bring up what he is really doing there and THEN convince her to come home. im leaning towards the second, myself, as she's all alone in a big new city and has had a crap homelife, blamed for her sister's death, she would be skittish.
plus, there is something wrong with the story. if cordy was a surrogate daughter to giles, how come she didn't recognise him on the phone? please update soon. |
 Eat shorts on a barbeque 2005-07-15 . chapter 1 pleasase update for the love of GORDAN! YOU'RE DRIVING ME CRAZY |
 J 2004-08-11 . chapter 3 awesome! why'd u stop update soon! |
 Kathleen 2003-09-19 . chapter 3 Please update soon
Kathleen |
 Tariq 2003-08-16 . chapter 3 Hi. COOL! PLZ CONTINUE! |
 Salor Earth 2003-08-16 . chapter 3Update soon. Please, PLEASE! update soon.
Sailor Earth |
 V Street 2003-08-03 . chapter 2 plz update |
 slay_gal 2003-04-24 . chapter 2 I LOVE THIS STORY! u have to write more im going to beg! plz...plz...plz! |
 TK2 2003-03-08 . chapter 2More soon, please, this story is missed!! Have a nice day! |
 redcristal 2003-03-02 . chapter 1i think you shuld write the next chapter |
 ellie C 2003-01-18 . chapter 2Hey i think this is really good, please write the rest soon, i can't wait to see what happends. |
 kat175 2002-12-07 . chapter 2hey i love this!! and i also hat...disliked both joyce(for kicking buffy out(session(?)2) and the angel thing) and dawn(because well duh she's dawn)!!!well i hope you write more!bye~ |
 baby 2002-12-04 . chapter 2 I love it just please finish this story its
cool |