Quikil 2005-10-29 . chapter 1WOWZERS! That was total fluffiness all around! Well, that was one of your cuter R/Hr stories, and i like it so much that i am adding it to my favorite stories list! YAY FOR YOU!
One thing i have to comment on though: sometimes, you should look through your stories (proofread), but instead of reading them silently, read them out loud. If you did that in your fic, you wouldn't have put in so many commas.
One last thing: do you have a fetish for the word zephyr? You can tell...
P.S. THREE HEADS!
Yours Truly,
-Quikil |
lostwords 2005-09-24 . chapter 1AW! I LOVE YOU...THAT WAS SO SWEET AND FLUFFY! |
Concealed 2005-07-05 . chapter 1Aw... |
Togipi trainer 2003-12-31 . chapter 1 togi togi prri ^_^
my togipi says that was god ^_^ |
Spellcastre 2003-06-28 . chapter 1Oh...that was so sweet...and Ron does make the team yahoo...at least in OOtP hehehe.
ANYWAY, this was so kyoot!
I loved this one.
~Spellcastre~ |
PrincessJedi 2003-03-12 . chapter 1This is great |
Rosekeet 2003-03-06 . chapter 1Fluff! Fluff! Fluff! Yeah for fluff! YEAH! And there was zephyr again. hmm. |
She's a Star 2003-01-03 . chapter 1Awww, I love it. :-) Ron was too adorable for words here, and your imagery was really vivid - I could see what was going on in the story perfectly as I read.
Wonderful story. Very sweet and romantic.
~*Star |
ChibiRHM 2002-12-14 . chapter 1J'adore le Fluff. ^_____________^ |
Margarita Mocha 2002-12-03 . chapter 1Youi are an awesome author. Very awesome, and you feel the same way about H/H as I do. It's like kissing you brother > Bye
~~~~Margarita Mocha |
Ketchum 2002-11-30 . chapter 1very cute! as usual :) good job!!! |
pottyforpotter 2002-11-25 . chapter 1This story was so sweet. What can I say? I'm a total sucker for any Ron/Hermione fluffiness/fuzziness/mushiness/squishiness ... ya get my point? Anyway, I must say, your writing stlye is excellent. You have a great way of setting the mood with your writing. It's great.
Seeya
-Potty Gal |
strimmer 2002-11-24 . chapter 1All I can say is awwwwwwwwwwww! It was a great read!
Liz* |
speck211hotmail.com 2002-11-23 . chapter 1sooo purty :) |
Krum-Luver 2002-11-22 . chapter 1AWWWW!! CUUUTE!! i like how it was Hermione who made the first move, instead of Ron, like in a lot of fics. Props to ya, babe! |