Wah! When you finish 'Dark Side of life'? I want read more! More! Ranma-chan need love and honor, and you leave her here? Wah! You mean! LOL, all kiddin' aside though. I'd really like ya to add another chapter to 'Dark Side of Life' Gawd, I love Ranma-chan fics, and this one is amazing!

You have to update this one, PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ dont leave me hangin here, im going to go mental of all these abandoned fic, gwa, plz write another chapter, and I want a happy ending, Ranma Saotome doesnt lose.

I dunno, I like the idea, but Ranma was awfully clueless about smoking the pipe. I think the scene would be a lot more effective if you write it with a little more introspection; probably Ranma is fed up with her situation, and simply wants to try breaking out of her horrid life. (That also would fit in with how easy you made Nabiki dressing Ranma up seem)

It does seem odd that Nabiki wouldn't come along to the party, though. In the series, she seems to like hands-on supervision and dealing. (And this is just a high school party; I doubt that Nabiki had to sacrifice her invitation to get Ranma in the door). There are a number of reasons she could have, but it'd be nice if the reader is given a bit more of a hint.

Wow...dark and angsty. Mmm...dark-like and angsty. With cheries! Anyway, to be serious (aww...):
Have to agree that Nabiki should know/have known something. Unless you are going to portray her as not as smart as she usually is shown *shrug* which is possible. Wondering where you were going to take it, though...Ranma + Heroin seems to = restrictive plot...or is that just me? Anyway, hooked my interest right off. Good luck in future!

Please contenue! Just don't turn this into a non stop anst-fest:|
Nabiki is bound to ask some questions, and I don't think she will like the answers.
Genma, what can I say? All he has left is his son
and the Art. He is way to dense to accept Ranmas
condition as permanent.

I really don't like support group-like casts or
happy endings, but if this fic is going to be much longer there should be some hope for poor
Ranchan

Is the Nabiki in this story a brain-dead moron? Or is she in league with Heero... a scout for "new" victims? I mean, sending Ranma to one of "those" parties in the state he was in...

I certainly hope Nabiki gets what's coming, regardless of which case you go with. She directly responsible for what occurred.