when I reached the end, I half wished that you had prolonged jack's suffering, although that could be because I'm a major angst-that-turns-wonderful fan. I did, however, take a moment to laugh histerically at the fact that you chickened out. Ha!

Thanks 4 saving Jack! A sequel sounds great! Go for it!

-Kaylee

he lives! HE LIVES! *breaks down into happy sobs, prances around and hugs Race!muse, then returns to the review* Wheee! I gotta say, I'm glad you wimped out, this was a nice, fuzzy ending. the best kind in my opinion. good job!

*Crunch*

p.s. are you alright? Oy vey, to write with a swolen hand, thats dedication.

wow, are you okay? nothing is broken right?

woo hoo, jack lives!

would love to read a sequel are you crazy?

2am, high on caffeine and sugar-ha, beat that!

anyway, i have really enjoyed this story. will be anticipating the arrival of the next!

This is a great story! You should really update soon, or i'll soak you with a...um..spork! Yeah, that's it! I'll soak you with a spork. You had better watch out!

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(just one more for good measure!

Keep it up! I have to find out what 'the Miracle' is in your story! You're a great author.

-Kaylee:-)

...yeah, and...ugh, cliffhanging, what a tool, i need to learn to use it myself a bit better!

*clanging cup on iron bars of writer's block cell* more, more, more, more

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You HAFTA write more! (sorry, was that too demanding?) What happens when Davey finds out?

-Kaylee

This is an excellent, original idea for a fic! It's nice to see an author do something original with the characters. I'm hooked. _

I agree with Shimmerwings. Slash could easily be incorporated. *g* But carry on as is; I like what you're writing!

Can't wait for the next update!

Well...Loving it of course. Forced to demand more.

I like the idea behind this story. Very original and believable. I'm intrigued. And I definitely hope that something happens to justify the title of your story.

*ahem* And I just thought I'd mention that you could easily add some slash between Jack and David. Heh. Not that I'm biased in that direction or anything. Even if you think I'm crazy for mentioning that, lol, thanks for making David a sympathetic character at least. It's an excellent characterization of him.

I DEMAND MORE!

*giggles* Much more is required...this is wonderfulness, even if you ARE killing Jack.

first off, i still can't wait to read more...i've tried flipping the computer over but the other side of the sheet is blank...

secondly...speaking as someone who knows cancer first hand...they all run different courses and no two are ever the same...while i was going through chemo i ran into many people in the hospital with different types and we all had different experiences...sorry, i ramble, i know, i fully admit it...can't help it, but i come by it naturally...

okay, okay, i'm going now...by the way, love the story so far!

Oh, gorsh. That is one of the saddest things I've ever read! please make him survive? please? make it a MIRACLE! and keep up the great writing!

*Crunch*

I will definately follow this story. My best friend just recently died of Cancer, so if you need any real life expiriences of Cancer patients or anything, i'm always here. But please don't make Jack die, and i'm not just saying that because i think he's cute or whatever, i'm saying it because my friend died of cancer, and it is an awful time, and even though its just a story, I wouldn't want to read about someone dieing of cancer again.

My thoughts on my friends death are under the title Best Friends Tribute. I wrote it the night she died.

I was hoping there would be a story sometime of one of the newsies going through cancer, because its such an awful disese.

Thank you for writing about this.