I think I'm insane for not reveiwing on the past 13 chapters, but this one made me laugh. xD Nice job on all of them so far, especially this one. =)

I don't know how I've managed to miss these until now but so far - excellent.
And I think Sipowicz would last about 5 minutes before throwing a punch at one or other of them!

Ah, daf9! It's so good to read this again!

Thought that these sounded interesting.

But as a very loyal Logan fan - must admit I was extremely dissappointed when I read this entry.

Love of Goren doesn't have to spell dislike and disrespect for Logan ( and his fans ) just my opinion of course. But I'm sure every ohter Logan fan would feel the same way.

Ron Carver in drag...oh the images are delightfully amusing

I giggled too hard at the thought of Alex hauling ** to scribble on bathroom walls with gel pens...I have a bruise...your job is done!

oh carver!

Man, that was a good movie. And I only wish I had this good of reading material in my bathroom.

Hurrah! New chapter! (Maria has gone on a month-long time out. Deakins gave her temporary leave so she could go and write her novel).
Another wonderful set of limericks. Now Maria's waiting for Bobby to get home. He's bound to want to edit this cursed novel... cop dialogue is so annoying!

Ah daf! Such wonderful compositions you write!
But...

NaNoWriMo calls me away
So I won't be at work today
I confess, that to write
Is my greatest delight
So run along Bobby and play
- Maria Goren.

Oh, HEE! Funny as always.

Forget Maria
Or that tramp Sienna
I'm the one Bobby loves
We're like two turtledoves
I'm his wife Adrienna!

Very clever, it seemed like you had hit a sort of slump lately, but these are awesome!

*giggles* Oh my gosh. I am amused. Nicely done.

Ouch. This is getting quite catty. *giggles*