Dear Author

Interesting story, involving Mara Jade's youth; well-written, discriptive emotional, tense and realistic.

The wholesome standards are high; nothing offensive.

I hope this review has a good influence on you. God bless

Data Seeker

This story is fascinating and I usually dont read about this period in Mara's life. You do a very good job of portraying her, you should write more fics about her, like her adult life. You would do it very well!

Very good, creative, story! I look forward to reading more!

I like this story. Can't wait to read the rest of it once FFNet is back up to

full working capacity.

Knightewolfe

I like this story. Can't wait to read the rest of it once FFNet is back up to

full working capacity.

Knightewolfe

O this is so good so far! I really like it, it's an excellent portrayal of what Mara's childhood with the Emperor was like! You must write more, YOU MUST! Please? Pretty please? Pretty pretty please, with sugar on top? I want to read more of your story!

wow i absolutely love this series, i think u really oughta write more, excellent work writing mara's character and the emperor, superb job

great chapter, i really like ur series

wow, that was really long (rubs eyes) but really good, i really like this series, great work

Wow... so there's to be no part 4? Too bad - this series is really great!

Excellent!

Great job! On to Chapter 2!

These stories rock! Even though the focus is on Mara, the "supporting cast" are just as well written. Awesome :)

Great story! There aren't many young Mara stories around. I really enjoyed this one. Oh by the way this is Candie K.

Good, A "Little Mara" story where you don't try to manipulate her past. I so hate it when people do that. This is quality "Little Mara" writing. Keep it up.