 Kate 2005-10-13 . chapter 1 It is really good so far |
 mimi4 2003-12-31 . chapter 1Good story. Please continue. |
| Jillian Ryn 2003-12-01 . chapter 1 Amazing. I love that the storys are connected. Again your an amazing writter, wonderful job. |
| Frozen in Motion 2003-10-24 . chapter 1 YES! Write more!
aw poor Arabella
I luv James for that thought! Woo go Delia!
haha plez continue? |
| XxDragon Princess NikkixX 2003-10-16 . chapter 1 Hm. Interesting. I really liked it. I mean, it was a totally different take on the characters. I think this was probably written before Order of the Phoenix was released though. Maybe you could edit it to include things like Arabella is a squib and so never went to school, and Lily was actually part of the *in* crowd because James obviously liked her alot. Or maybe she wasn't? *shrug* But i really enjoy your writing. It's very good. And your grammar and spelling is excellent. None of the sentences sounded choppy at all, it all flowed really well. I think with a repost of some newly discovered things, and this story will have tons of potential! Please keep it up!!
Nikki |
| darksarchangel 2003-10-05 . chapter 1 aww i love it!! its a really good start update update update! |
| Templa Otmena 2003-08-29 . chapter 1 Hey! This fic is really coming along well...I hope that you *do* update soon...
It's eally interesting reading about all of the other people that you have managed to mould into MWPP/L lives...want to read more.
PLS PLS PLS UPDATE SOON! |
| InsearchofmyJames 2003-07-30 . chapter 1 Very cool story except you MUST write another chapter because I want to read more! I like your livejournal BTW!
~Lily B |
| kara 2003-07-26 . chapter 1 i like this!! write more soon!! |
| Dusty Harlequinade 2003-02-17 . chapter 1 Why is there no more of this, Kimmy?
I like it and would love to see what's going to happen next. :) |
| fairyofwallpaper 2002-12-15 . chapter 1 yeah, you should write more! i like it...but i hope you stop making james&co. be mean soon...:) |
| Madame Puddifoot 2002-12-11 . chapter 1 Hey! i'm so shocked this hasn't been reviewed a lot! honestly, it's really good, i would really love to see another chapter if u please. btw, u are my savior and shining light. YOU REVIEWED MY STORY AND I LUV U!!!!the first person 2 review. thank u so much, but u better not abandon this story!!!!!! ~*lilygurl88*~ |
| sirius' lover 2002-11-21 . chapter 1 oh i love this, please go on i cant wait to read more. |
| Walking Contradiction 2002-11-21 . chapter 1 Awww...I really like this chapter...The whole concept in general...its great. I hope you update soon, and when you do, let me know, please. Kudos! |
| 2002-11-20 . chapter 1 this story is pretty good!! Please write more. But needs to be exciting, like Lily is a Firewitch... |
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