 Some1Else 9/20/03 . chapter 3This was yet another good story which sounded like an actual episode, which is primarily the reason why I've read the other two stories you've done and left reviews behind. I'd have to say the funniest part in this particular story was when Speedy got drunk.
Speedy: (dazed, looking up) Hello sky!
That's quite a realistic portrayal of someone whose had an excessive amount of booze. A lot of other lines were good for chuckles as well, but that one was the best. Anyway, this was some good stuff, as usual. Good work.
Keep on writing. |