   pok'egirl12 2/20/12 . chapter 1AWWWWWWWW! |
| ignore 10/1/11 . chapter 1 Ignore those people that said your story is terrible.They are hard judgers.Your story was great but I have to admit it had a few spelling and grammar errors but thats it... |
| x.Arcanine.x 10/1/10 . chapter 1 awesome story! you should make one about pikachu and dawn's buneary! |
| christinesangel100 12/3/09 . chapter 1 Aw, Pikachu!
That's so sweet...Poor Pikachu! That episode is so sad...How could Ash ever think Pikachu would be better without him? Is he an idiot?
Anyway, this is a great story. Well done! |
| melodybutterfly 11/28/09 . chapter 1 really sweet story |
| theking6 1/9/09 . chapter 1 Great |
| Novak 5/20/08 . chapter 1 i loved that episode, it made me cry nearly, i love this story, not much changed really, except pikachu's point of view hehe |
| Aisling Katalyst 3/15/08 . chapter 1 i just have to say that you spelt View as "Veiw" twice and its spelt as View. |
| WildCroconaw 3/29/07 . chapter 1 I LOVE that episode! My senior class used the song from it for our prom song in 2004! |
| Angel6530 8/3/06 . chapter 1 i dont know wy but it almosy made me cry |
| DKN 2/18/05 . chapter 1 Um... this is appearing in the Fullmetal Alchemist fanfiction section, is there some kind of mistake?
Cute story, I guess... |
| Flip Dictionary 4/21/04 . chapter 1 The episode was good. Your story needs help. |
| WildTotodile 3/17/04 . chapter 1 What a beautiful story! I give it 2 thumbs up. |
| enriya 9/16/03 . chapter 1 good keep up the good work |
| Johto League Champion 6/24/03 . chapter 1 If you want a song in their, use the one from the TV show. If you're going to write, do it correctly. It was the same problems with the other ones in this one. Uh... Digimon are the Champions? |
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