oh good good good. i love it when vaughn dumps alice and then goes and kisses syd. tralala. you just made my day.

I totally agree. Syd and Vaughn did need that happy ending.I love to read the romance fics for S\V.Can't wait to read your next fic,especially if it is like this one.Keep on writing your fics the same way,don't listen to the people that think it is too mushy.Besides, the world would be a better place if it had more mush.

F.Y.I.-I am completly in love with Joesph Swearingen.He's SO HOT!

Hey, this is good. Is there going ot be more?

great really great

That was great. It's nice to have their feelings out in the open. Update soon.

Yay!
What a nice (potential) finish to a great episode.
And you managed to bring Will into it without making it a Dawson's Creek cheez-fest, kudos.

Very enjoyable,
~cs

The only thing this could maybe use is a title??? Other than that it's an excellent shippery story. I think more people than just you needed a happy ending.

Ausome!!! This is one of the better S/V stories I've read. Sequel is possible please? vEry nice. GReat job!

I actually do not think that this is out of character at all. It of course couldn't of happened on the show cause it's too soon, but when it does I think that this is perfect. It was honest and in character, yet very romantic. As fun as it would be to see, the whole he grabs her and kisses her and says 'screw protocol' just will not work for me..it's too..you know. Great job!!!

It totally didnt suck! I love having the two of them in a happy ending situation heck mine eds up with a happy ending! I love them too much for it not too! You should definately keep this going...it could be so good having the two of them not being able to tell anyone about whats going on and stuff...i skipped that part in my story but yours could be really good...

Lovin' it! Oh how I wish it could be true! I especially liked where she went to visit her mother. She is, after all, a key character in anything that's got to do with Sydney, even more so after her little conversation with Vaughn. Great job! I'm looking forward to reading more of your fics,

thats was actually really good i expected just a s/v fluff but it was really good and i LOVED the part with irena u caught her character perfectly!!

Firstly: no story that ends up with Syd and Vaughn together sucks. Unless the grammar is really attrocious.
Secondly: This particular story DEEPLY doesn't suck. I really like it. The way you have Will being a friend (and not a jealous wanna-be boyfriend) is nice, and Syd and Vaughn kissing... Icing on the cake, baby. :D great stuff!

I enjoyed this, but you shift in verb tenses a lot, which is irritating. To do my best to keep from sounding like the future high school English teacher I am: pick a tense and stick with it at all costs. If you read your story aloud to yourself, then you will catch the shifts much more easily than if you read it silently.

Anyhow, thank you for a delightful story!

Hey I loved your fic! I also needed a happy ending with sydney and vaughn! i couldnt belive they left me hanging like that after Counteragent, lol! Well anyway it was great, are you gonna write more to this? I would love to read it if you do!