kokoronagomu 2006-09-01 . chapter 1that was sweet... and i meant it in a purely masculine sense |
Captain Black Rum 2003-08-26 . chapter 1*clicks the 'go' button*
Clicky click click!
I like one-shots better than the longer stories sometimes, because one-shots are, as they say, "short, sweet, and to the point". Or something. Whatever.
I liked this story a lot. It was realistic, descriptive, and interesting. I've read some of your other work, too, and it was as great as this one, which is really good.
*also waves wolf flag thing*
The Wolf of Mibu can never die!
i love the Kyoto Arc! Don't ask me why.
Kenshin: PLEASE, DON'T ASK! SHE'LL TALK FOR HOURS!
*glares at Kenshin* Well, this is getting kinda long, so see ya! I look forward to seeing more of your work! |
Stormy_rose 2003-02-18 . chapter 1 Please let there be more! |
Chiruken 2002-11-26 . chapter 1I always did think there was a heap big respect thing going on between Kenshin and Saito---desptie their snide comments and bickering. I did wonder myself what Kenshin might think about his old nemesis' supposed death---just never got around to following through on the thought, though. Hehe---no point now since you pretty much said it all. Great fic, enjoyed it immensely and lookin forward to reading more of you works. Chiruken |
Susan Ann 2002-11-22 . chapter 1great story, I like it. Leave it to Kenshin to be the eternal optimist in most things. Thanks again for writing, hoping to read more from you... |
CGP 2002-11-21 . chapter 1 This one is good as well. I really enjoy these stories of yours about the "missing month". Keep it up. |
Crystal Snowflakes 2002-11-21 . chapter 1*grins* *click!* Anyhow, that was cool. Kenshin shouldn't think that Saitoh's dead...after all, he's a darned bastard that doesn't die ^^ Don't get me wrong, I like Saitoh ^^ |
MsJadey 2002-11-21 . chapter 1This was a good start, but I disagree with your opinion on one-shots, they can be too short. You picked an interesting topic, and it was written fairly well, although there were some typos that stood out. Still, I would like this much better if you continued your thought and dug deeper into Kenshin's reaction. I look forward to reading more of this, but I have one final request, please drop the unnecessary Japanese. It didn't add to the story, and would likely detract if the reader couldn't understand it. Your potential is good, expand on it! |
louie 2002-11-21 . chapter 1 I LOVED THIS FIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I also wonder what kenshin would say after they told him that Saito was "dead". Good Fic. |
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