Nice beginning, I liked the atmosphere you managed to create. It's a pity that this will probably never be updated - it's been literally years since you started it after all, but nevertheless good work.

well written. i like your descriptions of ma-kun and taki ^_^ keep up the good work!

TAKI IS A F&*$ING BASTARD! HE F&*$ING GANG RAPED SHU-CHAN! HE SHOULD BURN IN HELL!

I realize you haven't updated in a long time, but I have to review this in hopes you plan on continuing it. It's really good. I like the fact that you're looking at the friendship between the three of them which seems rather close.
And don't even worry about trying to compete with another fic. People will like this one, I gaurantee it.

great story! i like it very much! i cant wait
to see what happen next Taki. keep up the good
work

Seeing as I'm starting to enjoy Tachi angst, why not have Tohma decide to do to him(hire people) what Tachi did to Shuichi? (rape)

I'd like to see how Tachi deals with it emotionally and psychically.


Update soon.

ne. I want u to rape tachi! please! onegai!

wow.i luv the way u perceived taki's feelings! this is really really a great fanfic, u gotta luv them ^_~!!

hi! im a fan of bad luck and of nittle grasper but im also a fan of ASK! please continue! Tachi's just soooooo coooooool!!! ^_^

Nhaaaiii!! You have got to finish it!! It's so damn hard to find ASK's fics, and I love them!!! It's my fave band in Gravitation, and Tachi is the best of all them!!! Tachi rox!!! XDDD You have to finish, in name of ASK and it's fans, that are not many, but are totally in love with them, their leader and hate Shuichi and Yuki to death!! XDDDD

Onegai!! ;-;

I'm usually not a big ASK fan, but the way they're more human in your fic than they're usually portrayed has actually gotten me interested in them. So, please continue this story quickly, it's really good. The same goes for the Bible of Kumagoro, I love that story too.

You know...I always wondered what happened to ASK...as far as I know, the just disappeared in the manga (but then again my Japanese is really bad so I really don't know)

It would be cool for them to come back for revenge
The revenge of Taki!!! BWAHAHAHA

*blushes*sorry, i'm high on cold medicine

Yay. ASK.