Oh my goodness...that was great. I knew it. I knew it. >:3

Chiaroscuro! :-D I didn't read your story, because I haven't seen Smallville, sorry :( but I love your other writings, and I had to let out a squeal of joy when I saw your title! Chiaroscuro! The interfusion of dark and light, swirling together and melding... Chiaroscuro has been my favorite word ever since I saw it as the name of a rat in The Tale of Desperaux. I love this! Awesome!

Wow. Wow. Wow. That was amazing. The little descriptions of the camera work enhanced the story so much. You paid so much attention to small details. The ending was so awesome. It was insanely good. WOW!
Also, you kept the people in character. I could see this as an actual episode of Smallville. Wow!

LOL. This was great. TOm's character made no sense to me - I thought he'd be some sort of villian, or be a villian-turned-good-guy - but then I learned he was Bruce. I reread it, and everything made perfect sense. Brilliant job. And "the world's finest" view? Nice touch. My only complaint is that it's in teleplay-format. I'd much rather read a story than a script.

Oh wow. That was very awesome. It seems so difficult to condense into a script covering the plot from beginning to end, keeping our interest and answering all our questions. You're talented at it. Thanks for the great read.

Very nicely done! I love how I could just see everything so clearly in my head as I read this, played out like a Smallville ep. I'd love to see this one as part of the show =)

hi - great script!!!! you obviously have a terrific knowledge of screenwriting (something i sorely wished i possessed) and loved the batman twist. although looking at your profile i should've known :P seriously, i don't know if e kelly's your name, but if you've ever heard of david e kelly that script's up there with some of his, despite the different shows.
good work again keep it up
lisa