I really love this fanfic! It has such a sweet, simple quality in the first chapters, and as Max and Tyson's relationship evolves into something complicated i find myself hooked, one hundred percent hooked. I can't wait to see the final installment, hoping that you publish it of course,but until then i just have to say I really love this fic!
Love, Child of the Thirteenth Sign

Update soon! Very soon! I love the story, it's awesome! I've read it many times but keep forgetting to review. -.-U

I like your story very much. I wonder if Tyson will sort out his feelings in the next chapter. plz update soon.

Ok.. so I got bored and started reading your Beyblade fic anyways.

And I am SO glad I did. This is really beautiful and realistic - even though I'm not familiar with this fandom and can't tell how in character Tyson, Max and so on are, I'm totally falling in love with all of them. And I mean All - Tyson, Max and Kenny, of course. But Max's dad and Lucy too. The poor girl. Tyson's voice, here, actually shows his age without demeaning him or his problems by making him 'just a kid'. Even though he is. Just a kid, that is.

And now I want to read Beyblade... drat it. You've done for me what Silvaren did for me with her (?) Prince of Tennis story.

Aw that is so cute! Writing this fic may be difficult for you but it is definatly worth it

I was talking with my friend this afternoon (ok yesterday afternoon seeing as it's 4 in the morning) (and I promise this story does have a point and is not just some insane 4 in the morning ramble) and we were discussing the merits of different yaoi beyblade relationships and we both agreed that Tyson/Max was a very ** and unnatural couple. Well I am now eating my words in the proverbial sense mostly because I'm too high on coffee to eat. Thanks so much for reversing my opinion and I can't wait for the next installment.

I'm very glad that you decided to not make your fourth chapter your final one. Especially seeing as there are 5 senses (fifth one being touch and all *keeps mind out of gutter* *stays on sidewalk instead*)

Hey I just noticed that you last updated 2 years ago- please tell me that doesn't mean you've abandoned this fic. I have to know what happens next. *prays that you are suffering prolonged crippling writers block that is curable*

wow...

you really captured the feelings of confusion that other fics just don't have, thats it doesn't feel instantly okay to like a guy.

i love the way you have written this, it's really emotional and powerful. excellent stuff.

*applauds*

*pouts* still waiting for an update.
*goes off to re-read fic*

aw! CUTE! i cant beleive it! you are writing a REALLY good TyMa fic!^^ YAY! its amazing! it really is! omg! please, you HAVE to update soon! asap even! please!i really cant wait for the next bit! its getting really interesting and your story is so good^^.#
**#squiz#**

I can't possibly descirbe the elation I feel every time I read this fic. It's brilliant and well thought out. I've read it so many times, and I can't get enough! I'm terrible about reviewing (forgetful that way ^_^,) and couldn't believe I hadn't told you how I felt about your story. I think you have every right to be proud of this. It's truly wonderful. You've taken a rather simple minded show and turned it into something quite beautiful. I am astounded every time I encounter talent like yours (which is rare). You have a true gift, and I urge . . . no, I BEG you to continue so that I might revel in the happenings of another fantastic installment. Until then, keep smiling.

-Obsidian Sphinx (Alyssa)

lol
loved them
cant wait 4 the fifth

That was totally awesome...
I love the way you write it from Tyson's point of view..
in fact, i love the way you wrote it, period
It was great...
seriously

Ah, i've re-read this fic a billion times. And i still love it! It's brillient, but... the end... i need an ending, or at least an update.
not trying to rush you or anything... but it's killing me. It reminds me of a book i read once with the last page ripped out.
i'm not trying to be pushy, really i'm not. i'm just dieing to find out the end.
please update!

oh, i just read this fic again, for the 100th time. and it's killing me! it needs a conclusion. i hope you update soon. everything in it is so perfect. i'm dying to find out the end.
oh please oh please oh please *begs* update soon.

I love this fic! *sniff* It's so cute... and Max is just, just, aw.
And I'm seeing Tyson in a hole new light now 'cause of you.
Thanks!

oh please please please please please please please update soon, this is a great story and i totally love, you have got to update!