love this story ! just one of the few you'll ever see. it's really good, one thing though, since this is an 'M' rated story you can do 'those scenes' i think, i haven't heard of new any new rules ect. but still, great story

Send me an unsencored version of this please

Please update your story

Oh Gods... don't censor the best parts... argh!

Thanks for reading my Lurtz manual! I'm glad to see an Uruk fan finding it and enjoying it! I don't think humor is my strong suit, but I thought the big guy deserved the same treatment that Leggy and Bory have gotten. ;)

I read the version of Body and Spirit on the OrcSlash archive and it is done wonderfully. Even though the subject matter couldn't get any darker than it is, you handle the scenes with skill, thoughtfulness and dignity. This plot has been treated as ** by hacks, but this is almost poetic in parts. The line "Let her ripen and soften in the dark." is chilling and erotic at the same time.

Excellent!

um,WHY ARE THERE SO MANY PARTS CENSORED!(shrieks hysterically)nevermind, just update quikly OK.

Elves sleep with their eyes open, just in case you didn't know, although I'm sure you do. Their eyes just glaze over, is all.

I'm beginning to actually like Marluk. OOh I scare myself... orcs. Gak. Could you describe Marluk more detailedly? So that he won't be just another random background orc to a reader...

Off to read Mother of Isengard now!

~Sremla

Interesting dialogue...

I see Celebrian's becoming a slave to hunger. Animal instincts. Your Celebrian character reminds me of a hunted deer, cliched as it may sound.

~Sremla

Oh, EWW!! EWW! THEY ATE ELVES! NO! EW! EW! SICK! ELVES!

ELVES--> SACRED--> CANNOT BE EATEN--> LEAVE THE ELVES ALONE! ARGH!

ELVES!

WAH!
*bursts into hysterical sobs*

~Sremla

...disturbing to say the least. By 'censored', I was kind of expecting a milder version of whatever you wrote in the first place. Oh snap, I suppose using my imagination is good for me.

Powerful portrayal of her emotions; I like. Usually when I try to describe someone's feelings, I end up using the same words over and over and over and over and over...you get the picture. Over and over again...again.

~Sremla

Well. I read One Dark Night and thought it was cool, so I decided to check out your other works.

What can I say? Promising plot (I've only read the first chapter so far..), good vocabulary, obviously been beta-ed, unless you write with zero errors without editing, no grammar mistakes, understandable...overall really good so far.

MM sorry for the ambiguous word: good. Heheh. Not good at expressing myself. =)

~Sremla

You're a brilliant writer... one of the top three LOTR writers I've encountered and hands down the one with the most talent for writing dark fiction. The story of Celebrian always fascinated me, part of me always wondered what could have possibly been done to her to make her leave her parents, husband, and children behind. I think you hit it. This is one of the most disturbing things I've ever read, and I think it perfectly captures the horror and powerlessness and elf must feel in an orc's hands. I love how you write orcs by the way. Tolkien never delved deep enough into their way of life for my curiosity, and most fanfic writers just plain suck at writing them. Your orcs are actually frightening and fascinating in a disturbing way. Maybe I'm a little disturbed myself, but I enjoy your orcs. By the way, don't be discouraged by the small number of reviews. This is the kind of fic that everyone reads, but is too timid to review. They probably think they'd be considered some sort of sadistic pervert if they wrote a glowing review for a fic where a helpless elf is molested by an orc... So please continue on. You've got me hooked. I do think that poor Celebrian's been tortured enough, and it's time for her sons make their grand entrance and save her knight-in-shining-armor style. Even if you leave it unfinished though, it's still amazing. Not to sound like a wing-nut, but I really enjoyed this dark story. So, um yeah... Enros rules! You're my new favorite writer!

are you ever going to update?
good story
if slightly unsettling

U know what? u should make your own website so u write the *censored* stuff thats what u should do cause it really sucks ** i tell u what

Veery interesting, as I happen to love the dark stuff.