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Suz4eva 2003-05-24 . chapter 20
Sorry..Serious Updating error. I updated the wrong thing!

Chaotique 2003-05-24 . chapter 20
I'm sorry but...what the **? Is this some random conversation you had with someone? It's not a story at all. I hope someone reports you. Maybe I will...
Banana Belle 2003-05-24 . chapter 20
Interesting, hope to see more soon.
Annon 2003-01-26 . chapter 17
Didn't seem very realistic, not at all like any of the characters. Overall very **.
Annon 2003-01-26 . chapter 17
Didn't seem very realistic, not at all like any of the characters. Overall very **.
SiriusLiLStar 2003-01-18 . chapter 1
Great story, Dana. Awesomeness. Very cool, considering I haven`t read one of these in the longest time !!
Tahnee 2002-12-27 . chapter 13
Great story, keep comin with more!!!!!!!!!!!
Spencer 2002-12-18 . chapter 12
Really good chapter!! Please update soon!! :)
jenny 2002-12-12 . chapter 1
i like your fic but i don't think harry and ronnie suit each other.and do they have to say they love each other so much it gets annoying.
Spencer 2002-12-11 . chapter 11
Really good chapter! Can you try to make the chapters longer?? Maybe not split up the scenes so much?? Please update soon!!! :)
TLWROX 2002-12-10 . chapter 11
Good! Maybe you should post the whole scene at once- instead of breaking them up. Like, this part should've been posted with chapter 10- since it takes place in the same setting. Can't wait for the next chapter... :) :) :)
Spencer 2002-12-07 . chapter 10
Really great story so far!! I just have one question. Ronnie has a job! How come no one is looking for her?? She just ran off!! :)
TLWROX 2002-12-06 . chapter 10
Man! Harry's snapping WAY too much. He needs to relax... This was a cute chapter- can't wait for the next. :) :) :)
Spencer 2002-12-06 . chapter 9
Please update soon!! :)
TLWROX 2002-12-05 . chapter 9
*SIGH* That is SO cute... And- LOL- he can't focus with her hands all over him... ;) Can't wait for the next chapter... :) :) :)
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