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| unique.normality 2007-12-13 ch 1, | abusew00t |
| sonia 2006-09-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was a really lovely story .What really made me go aw was when Ron told Hermione that he thought she was 'bloody beautiful'. Keep on writing more storys. |
| emmaly nickels 2006-09-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is a nice story which brings to life the true feeling that we know Ron and hermione have for eachother. You are a very good author and I think that you should write more of these stories. |
| Converse_Girl 2006-08-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseI agree with Hermione. Ron is fab with words. I wish someone word call me pretty (thoughtful expression) WA! SOB SOB SOB. Ahh, back on track. Great story. X!X!X! =@) |
| FleurFan 2006-08-08 ch 1, anon. | abusethis is a hot fic but it could do with a sequal. |
| Ms. H Weasley 2006-03-27 ch 1, anon. | abuse'Mandrakes' roots, when pounded into fine grains, can be-Oh, sod it.' HA! I loved this line! This is a v. v. v. good story. 'Their noses touched. "You're perfect, Mione." He told her. "I love you." Hermione sighed blissfully, a split second before their lips met.' AW! Loved it. x |
| the radical writer 2006-03-05 ch 1, | abuseaw, cuteness, aw! |
| Caitlin 2006-02-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt was great! I loved it and if that was your first one, then you are REALLY good at making fiction stories! Your fan, Caitlin. |
| chantel 2006-01-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt was so good add a sex scene!! |
| me 2006-01-19 ch 1, anon. | abusecute |
| libby 2006-01-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really liked ur fic. It was really sweet. I dont think, though, that Ginny would pull Ron into Hermione's room and lock them in there, although that was a surprising twist. I also really liked how Ron said he wasnt good with words, and then Hermione said, 'who says you're not good with words.' I thought that was really sweet. I hope my review has helped and encouraged you. I look forard to reading more of your fics! |
| Cristipotter 2005-12-21 ch 1, | abuseOh My GOd, that was totally cute...I loved it! |
| qserdopl 2005-11-24 ch 1, anon. | abusedfghjkl |
| <3rupert 2005-11-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseit should be longer!! really good lol but i wanna know what else happens!! :P "bloody beautiful" very nice and really in character. |
| Mildred Leise 2005-11-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseWOW, that...was...romantically...funny! I loved it! I'm a writer too (on page 87 14 font right now) but I've got to admit, you've got skill! Keep it up! |