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unique.normality
2007-12-13
ch 1,
abusew00t
sonia
2006-09-28
ch 1, anon.
abuseThat was a really lovely story .What really made me go aw was when Ron told Hermione that he thought she was 'bloody beautiful'. Keep on writing more storys.
emmaly nickels
2006-09-05
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis is a nice story which brings to life the true feeling that we know Ron and hermione have for eachother. You are a very good author and I think that you should write more of these stories.
Converse_Girl
2006-08-26
ch 1, anon.
abuseI agree with Hermione. Ron is fab with words. I wish someone word call me pretty (thoughtful expression) WA! SOB SOB SOB. Ahh, back on track. Great story. X!X!X! =@)
FleurFan
2006-08-08
ch 1, anon.
abusethis is a hot fic but it could do with a sequal.
Ms. H Weasley
2006-03-27
ch 1, anon.
abuse'Mandrakes' roots, when pounded into fine grains, can be-Oh, sod it.' HA! I loved this line! This is a v. v. v. good story.

'Their noses touched. "You're perfect, Mione." He told her.

"I love you." Hermione sighed blissfully, a split second before their lips met.'

AW!

Loved it. x
the radical writer
2006-03-05
ch 1,
abuseaw, cuteness, aw!
Caitlin
2006-02-18
ch 1, anon.
abuseIt was great! I loved it and if that was your first one, then you are REALLY good at making fiction stories!

Your fan,
Caitlin.
chantel
2006-01-28
ch 1, anon.
abuseIt was so good add a sex scene!!
me
2006-01-19
ch 1, anon.
abusecute
libby
2006-01-15
ch 1, anon.
abuseI really liked ur fic. It was really sweet. I dont think, though, that Ginny would pull Ron into Hermione's room and lock them in there, although that was a surprising twist. I also really liked how Ron said he wasnt good with words, and then Hermione said, 'who says you're not good with words.' I thought that was really sweet. I hope my review has helped and encouraged you. I look forard to reading more of your fics!
Cristipotter
2005-12-21
ch 1,
abuseOh My GOd, that was totally cute...I loved it!
qserdopl
2005-11-24
ch 1, anon.
abusedfghjkl
<3rupert
2005-11-12
ch 1, anon.
abuseit should be longer!! really good lol but i wanna know what else happens!! :P
"bloody beautiful" very nice and really in character.
Mildred Leise
2005-11-03
ch 1, anon.
abuseWOW, that...was...romantically...funny! I loved it! I'm a writer too (on page 87 14 font right now) but I've got to admit, you've got skill! Keep it up!
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