First, I haven't read chapter two. That should tell us something right there about how good I think this is. Second, I know NOTHING about West Wing. That will also say something about the reviewer. Third, this is my first review for this author. :-D Lastly, very good. No spelling errors. Minor grammar errors. Well thought-out. Maybe it was just me, but I really caught on to the feel of this story relating to 'dealing with life.' Something about it just smelled of how a son finds out about their father's past, and what they do about it. The E-mail at the end was a nice touch, and important, I think, for the story's solidity. Kudos, Sam. :-)