I loved it, absolutely loved it! But there are a few critical facts that you left out. First of all, Plovin Kut was killed when Yaddle was 200 years old on Koba by the Advozse. Yaddle was then captured, and trapped underground for about 200 years. When she was freed, she was promoted directly from Padawan to Jedi Master. This cuts down two of the "facts" you stated in your story: Yaddle being a Padawan at over 400, and her becoming a Jedi Knight. Also, what happened to Yiara? Other than that, it was a VERY good story. I really enjoyed reading it.

Write a sequel.

KEEP ON WRITING!!!!

Get Yaddle to come back and feed Yiara until she is old enough to understand.

This was great!!!

why did you leave me hangin?
you gotta write more

GIVE ME MORE !!!!!!!!!!!!! NOW!!!!!!!!!!!

less common character choice--very entertaining. good!