I really like this story; it's one of the best I've read on here! Keep up the good work!

this is a very deep and intriguing story...your plot is very unique and you write very elegantly--shame you haven't updated in a while...

I fear this is long abandoned, but even so I must say that I LOVED reading this- I thought it was great, very moving. Good luck with your writing!
Magda
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aw, why did you stop the story...? :'(

Wow...

I read this story a long time ago, but I only got to chapter six.

I really like this story, and I would absolutely love to see it end.

Finish it... Please...?

Wow this is really good!! I read it all in like a few hours- i got slightly obbsessive. please please post more soon...=]
~singing4ever

oh my god! this story is amazing! i understand that you havnt for nearing two years 9and i wander about that; why?) but i beg you to continue! its stunning. you have dealt with the charcters so sensitively and wiht true passion. its a crime to not finish the tale! so please update - i beg you!

ciao, ratty rowley

hey, i love this story, it definaly leaves one wanting more. you have a great writing style, it leaves everyone rooting for daine, hopeing to see her overcome everything, im assuming that after two years you have discontinued it, which is unfortunate, i feel that it could really be an amazing story.

This story is extremely enthralling. I have found it quite an addicting read, (it has been good way!). The plot, characterization, and the style of writing leave me craving more. It's all simply marvelously crafted. Very, very nice work. The story starts out bitter and begins to sweeten, subtly you write in the layers and build up the plot, bit by bit. Nothing happens too fast, just as it should. Brilliantly executed and artistically created. "Chains" is an amazing read and I long for more.

In absolute sincerity,
ZoharSkarth

wow... i must say i loved this, a rare find indeed as most tammy FF authors are illiteriate little adolescents who dont even know proper grammar.

Sad to see that this is abandoned though... added to alerlist just in case =3

...what happens next?? i so want to know!! pls hurry with the next chapter^^ its so good and amazing and...pls hurry!

what? just like that? i only get a little fluff...and its not evenm fluff.
come on you have not updated this since 06...and its 08 now! please update soon.
I admite i don't Update that often...but i mean two freaking years!?!?
ok i love it. please write more
Wolfchild101
p.s. i didn't want to log in..so i didn't

Ok Why havent you continued with this Story!?, It's So Good!. U have to write More Or I Will cry and then I Will Get Mad and Then I Will Go Destroy NYC (Sorry for anyone who lives there) Or... Do somethong drastic!

o are u going 2 continue this? I hope you do this is really intersting! You have Daines personality right even if she is literally crazy in the story. Update soon, can't wait to read more!
~Ajhena

if you change the names you have the beginnings of your own book. Change the copyrighted things and finish it. Then send it off to publishers and see if you have any takers.