I really think the story is interesting it would be really good if you continued your story...i can't wait until your story progresses

You definitely got my attention there. The story is intriguing, it was a big pity to see that it was only a chapter, and hasn't been updated for about 5 years now. Do you think it'd be hopeless on my part to wish for a prompt next chapter? I hate to see great stories gone moldy. I really, REALLY, wish to know where were/are you planning to take this story. Do you think that will be possible?
Hoping for you to continue this fic,
Bleu

Please finish this! I love your writing i happened upon it by chance and i fell in love with your skill at designing the characters, they are so lifelike. I started to read this one and i love the start of it!
Anyway I enjoyour writing and i look forward to seeing more
-Alpha

this so sounds very promising...you should finish writing it

xoxo
Fallen Angel

I think this is my 3rd review today, does that make you special...maybe! :) Anyway, 'new' is what I would call this story (story? oh no wait there is only 1 chapter! - hint hint). pleaseupdatethistotyprettyplease! ah, now you try chanting that to yourself. :) *now I will go and harrass someone else*

wow...
it is really very interesting...
i don't usually give a review anymore more than three words, ut this sure deserves this,...
it's nice and hopefully you'll update soon

Hey, I know it's been three years since you wrote this story. I've read it before, but now just decided to write a review. Well... are you thinking of continuing on this piece? It's very well done, even though it's only a short-piece.

What's Darien running from? Where will they end up? Update!!

I love it please update

*blinks* quite original, I'm sure I've never seen any fanfiction like this one before. I like it though, I like the mood that was created, the discomfiture and yawning silences. and if ever you wanted to continue it, I would completely support you. This, I think, has the potential to become a very interesting story. thanks.

Your talent with words is incredible. I really hope you update one day because it would be a terrible shame to leave this unfinished. You've got the beginnings of a masterpiece right here.

You ARE planning on continuing this, right?

I hope there are more chapters to follow...

This story is out of the ordinary and i love it! If you please, I would like some more chapters I have been hooked into this story!

Very nice. Love the plot. Go you. ^_^