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theTwilightLamb
2009-10-05 . chapter 1
I like this story and it wouldbe great if you could update!
asdfjkl;
2009-07-18 . chapter 1
just leaving this here? meanie xP
Stiehl
2009-07-13 . chapter 1
A little sad, but well done. "Luke Naberrie" does not exactly roll off the tongue quite as well as "Luke Skywalker", but obviously they could not let him keep his original name.
Mara Amon
2009-02-04 . chapter 1
That was so awsomeness! great job!
ibelieveintruelove
2009-01-13 . chapter 1
Aw that was so sweet! It's incredibly sad that both Padme and Leia died from the plague - and I definitely caught how Luke was sick too, prolly cause his mom and twin sister were dying. But why was Luke taken away? Was he strong enough to be a Jedi but not Leia? And why did Padme and Anakin allow that to happen? I can't see them wanting that. But it's so cool that Anakin came back to train Luke. Nice story!
Admiral Lily
2008-10-11 . chapter 1
What I wouldn't give to see a continuation of this particular story. To watch as father trained the unknowing son. To see them develop and bond and everything. But I also see how this story could be complete. A new beginning with the future unwritten and full of possibility. Wonderful job.
Vader's Fallen Angel
2008-10-03 . chapter 1
A nice, realistic AU. I glad that Anakin and Luke are together. But poor Padme and Leia. And the younglings speculation was accurate. Children will talk and those would be the things they would say.

Nice,
VFA
Kelev
2008-03-08 . chapter 1
This is so sad...but I think it's very good at the same time. Very fitting, and you wrote everyone just the way they ought to be. (So kudos to you, because not many people get it right! LOL)
Perhaps you could post a challenge on your profile so that others could make their own little oneshot follow up to this? It's just a suggestion, in case you decide not to write a sequel of your own to this.
Amazon101
2007-07-30 . chapter 1
The story itself is absolutely excellent. You misspelled "absence" in the summary, though.
Smoltenica
2007-07-27 . chapter 1
Oh, that was beautiful! Completely AU of course, but wonderful and... I'm sorry, I don't think I can write a coherent review at the moment. But thankyou, that was beautiful!
Erentei Lord of Insanity
2005-12-02 . chapter 1
Hm! An excellent story. I doubt you will continue, but I will fave your account so I can check occasionally.
Hieiko
2005-08-12 . chapter 1
Aww... sad and sweet, and very touching.
FORCEUSER5
2005-07-29 . chapter 1
plz update soon! I love it so far, but I want to know why the jedi had Luke instead of living with his family.
PLZ UPDATE SOON!
shloki
2005-07-08 . chapter 1
Great story, UPDATE!
heartnut
2005-07-06 . chapter 1
Oh. Interesting AU here. I hope to read more like it-it would make an interesting saga. You've left it nicely, though. Just enough for the reader to use their own imagination. Good job.
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