Very emotional and incredibly descriptive. You can almost feel the tension yourself like a fly on the wall watching this forbidden love unfold like a beautiful and exotic flower that blazes in its brilliance for but a brief moment before fading. I'm a fan of RyoxTen and even if I wasn't I think this would convince me otherwise.

Just great! I love it!

awesome story! cant wait 4 the next chapter!

I'm really liking this story! Great job writing it and please PLEASE update soon!

ska chan

ah! i'm an absolute tenchixryoko fan but that is so wrong on so many levels. tsk tsk bad tenchi what about you wife?

very very nice, the emotions were extreamly well done.

Woah nelly, I need a fan.. its getting a little steamy! Looking good, keep up the good work! Looking forward to the next chapter.

hello!I am the person with no name,i really yhis chappie please cointune

srry for my spelling

Wonderful story! Something I often wanted to see on the show, and you helped me see that. I love you and your story! You gets a ten in my mind!

Whoo! This story is so good, please update soon!

This is so good! I LOVE it! I always wanted him to choose Ryouko in the serieses. That's a weird word but what's weirder is how all three series were different but the same. *sigh* oh well update soon ok ja!

*tears*

This story is very good in details, keep up the good work.

thats is one of the greatest fanfics ive ever read plz write more or as quick as possible - la8er and i like the crazy glue idea . -

More, more, more Must have more of this wonderful fic. I sure hope you havent abandoned it. It is so good. Please update soon.