 jennied 2006-10-17 . chapter 7I loved this fic, the introduction of Janice was really clever and i liked how you changed her character and attempted to explain her behaviour.
Anyway if it's possible i think i liked this story even more than the first part lol!
That's all there is to say really.
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 tini243 2005-05-04 . chapter 7I actually read that one already and didn't review - shame on me. I like the way you portrait Janice, I always thought she was a funny and interesting character and you brought that across brilliantly. |
 Wickdgurl 2004-11-16 . chapter 1 Lovin it so far... I've also updated It All Changes! |
 SFGrl 2003-01-18 . chapter 7 Yeah, Gunther and Janice I could tolerate, LOL! I think the Chandler in your fic is gonna end up becoming Crazy Snake Man, LOL!! Glad Monica and Rachel stayed happy though!
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 Lindsey 2003-01-17 . chapter 7 Great story! :) I love the use of language. Quite funny and a good ending. |
 Lucy H 2003-01-17 . chapter 7Ooh... Janice and Gunther? Well, with something like that, you CAN'T leave it here. Write an epilogue at least, please! |
 Cress 2003-01-14 . chapter 6 Hey! How could you leave it at such a cliffhanger! I want to know what happens! Anyway, sorry I haven't been back to read this story in a while. I like how perceptive Emily is about Janice having a loud personality because she's overcompensating for being teased.
However, I'm somewhat ambivalent about the project to make over Janice. I think, why stifle her liveliness? Sure, she's annoying, but she's far from bland, and much more interesting than merely pretty characters like Joshua, Janine, Elizabeth, Tag, and so forth. I have an affection for Janice, just the way she was in season 3 when dating Chandler.
I don't know if you know, but on the CBS comedy, Everybody Loves Raymond, Maggie Wheeler (Janice) occasionally guest stars as a married friend of Debra and Ray's. She's amazingly "normal" and understated there, especially compared to the outspoken personalities of the Barone family. Anyway, it just makes me appreciate how good an actress she is. |
 Lucy H 2003-01-12 . chapter 6Wow... I'm sorry that I took a while to get along to this, but it was truly worth the wait, because it is *excellent*! |
 SFGrl 2003-01-07 . chapter 6 oooh, Joey or Chandler? hee. Well, Chandler seems to be a bit of a 'tard in this one, so I have a feeling she's going with Joey!
And regarding your Author's Note: I think that this fic seemed a bit less "British", though it has nothing to do with vocabulary (We use big words here in the States to ya know!) it's more intonation.
Example:
"oh, how I *regret* it" sounds very British. Also, we hardly ever say we are going to *ring* someone...we just call them. And the phone is busy, not 'engaged'. I noticed that it's pretty much the "new" Janice that sounds British in this one.
Overall, your story ideas are great, and it's always good to read something different. But I've noticed, in my experience as a writer/subject for reviews, that if you are going to write an A/U fic (ie, skewing from what would happen on the show) then the characters need to stay very true to the show. HOWEVER, if you alter the character, it needs to stay within the "Friends" realm at least a bit. It sounds weird, but I think there needs to be some semblance of "Friends" in all fics we do, or the readers don't seem to respond. I think that in this case, almost all of the characters have stayed in series character (except Janice, of course, but she's a peripheral, so its alright) with the exception, IMHO, of Chandler and Rachel. All in all, I'd say that despite lackluster reviews, you should consider this series a success in terms of creativity, and a few great laughs!
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 SFGrl 2002-12-23 . chapter 5 wow, a new Janice? strange, LOL.
The Friends sound very British, lol.
I definitely like how much the women are bonding, but I hope they don't totally screw over the guys...seems like Kathy and Chandler's relationship has been shaken up...Ross' as well.
Is the bet off? continue! |
 Lucy H 2002-12-23 . chapter 5This is the first fanfic that I have sat down and read for a long period of time. It was great!
Well, must be off to watch Friends! |
 Lucy H 2002-12-23 . chapter 4Great! |
 Lucy H 2002-12-23 . chapter 3Love it!
(Maggie - such a cute name!) |
 Lucy H 2002-12-23 . chapter 2I agree about the Chinese, by the way. Whenever I order chinese, I have enough for the next day as well! |
 Lucy H 2002-12-23 . chapter 1Great start! |
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