I-Love-Trunks1 2008-03-27 . chapter 17That was so good! |
SiriusRulez 2007-11-18 . chapter 17That was so good! I really loved it! Can you plz write a story of Mirai Trunks coming into the past and a relationship with Vegeta. |
XXXFlame-HazeXXX 2007-07-20 . chapter 17 -sniffle- that ... was ... ADORABLE! This review counts for the whole story and oh god what a story!
I love your writing style! You kept both Trunks and Vegeta close enough in character to be believable and that made the story top class!
All-in-all I rate this story 100/5 stars lol ... it was THAT good!
Keep up the great writing and story ideas!
~*~F.H~*~ |
Sabudabu 2006-10-07 . chapter 7It's been years since this fic was written, and I believe that, due to the lack of updates, you have left the fanfiction community forever, but regardless, I must point this out:
72 minus 28 is 46, not 56. In your explanation you forgot to change the 7 to a 6 when you carried the 10.
That aside, I love this fic very, very much. Possibly my favourite fic on this site. I hope you come back oneday and get back to writing Trunks of All Ages...and Thoughts of Vegeta... |
ss10009 2006-07-04 . chapter 18I love this story! I really enjoy stories about Trunks and Vegeta. This story was great |
Anoke 2006-06-23 . chapter 17wow... i havent read a long story that i really liked but i really liked this one good job!! |
yoyo 2005-07-05 . chapter 17 Veggie's kinda OOC at da end. but awesome storie. |
chaos daughter saori 2005-04-15 . chapter 18wow, that was such a greatfanfic I truly enjoyed it. I think you did a wonderful job. In the begginging you had that sap warning. And I was like oh god. Vegeta's going to be a friking pansy. But no you did an awesome job. The characterization was perfect. Shoot I dont even think Vegeta was OOC at all. Anywho, Very well done, I would be nice to see one about Mirar the thing is though you really have to see all the episodes. You know what I mean? Future Trunks is my favorite. He's in the Future Trunks Saga/Androids saga/ Imperfect Cell Saga/ and Perfect Cell Saga. Incase you diddn't know. Faboulous Job, once again.
-trunksgirl |
Scar Light 2005-01-29 . chapter 17I love this story! great job! |
A. C. H 2005-01-16 . chapter 18 This story was SO awesome! I actually found myself glued to the computer, unwilling to stop reading. Great job! A+! |
1961 Gibson EB Zero Bass 2004-12-28 . chapter 16 I love the story, one of the best fics I have ever read, no doubt. And as I read the re-re written report, I realized that if two demi saiya-jins had a child, there would be a 50% chance it would be a full blooded saiya-jinn. Thank you, Punnett Squares! Anyway, I just got to thinking that technically, there would once again be a true race of Saiya-jins, and well. That has potential, right? |
Anime-Crusader 2004-12-28 . chapter 9 Bulma deserved it, the *! (* = female dog/in heat) |
dorki3-cyndai 2004-08-15 . chapter 18i like this story so much i read it again! and once again I loved it! |
Panny_girl 2004-08-07 . chapter 17 This is one of the best fics I've ever read. You should write more V/T fics! |
cyndai 2004-06-24 . chapter 1 I LOVE UR STORY! this story is... *no words to describe* haha ur story actully made me cry...its really good you should be an author sumdai |