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| Angel Wings-008 2008-05-09 ch 6,  | abuseI loved it! The whole thing! It's very well written, and entertaining, and heart warming all at the same time! Fantastic job! |
| Gothicthundra 2007-07-14 ch 7, | abuse*giggles like a mad schol girl* That was a great ending and I loved the action and the fluff.. |
| kazumigirl 2007-07-06 ch 7, | abuseAww, definantly going on my fav. list! I really liked it how you kept true to the characters, yet Goten and Trunks were perfectly portrayed as little boys. Kudos! Look forward to reading more from you! |
| Padawan Jan-AQ 2007-05-30 ch 6, | abuseAw, cute! |
| Anoke 2006-06-21 ch 5, | abusei loved your hole story nicely done! |
| tay 2006-06-11 ch 3, anon. | abusehey, the story is good so far, but dont you think that Trunks is a little OOC? he isnt as bossy and mean in the TV series. |
| Scar Light 2005-01-13 ch 6, | abuseI Love This Story! lol |
| Girlie G 2004-08-05 ch 6, | abuseI REALLY liked this story! It was so cute! And So funny! I'll read the other thing too but i wanted to tell you that. I did not think that Vegeta was out of character either. You did a good job sliding him into it. :) |
| adidas 2004-02-03 ch 7, anon. | abusethat was such a cute storey! ^_^ |
| rooks 2003-11-03 ch 7, anon. | abusehm... singing in the shower? vegeta?... cool :) |
| rocks 2003-11-03 ch 6, anon. | abusewow! that was so nice! so realistic :) hehehehe, vegeta's finally more fatherly... whoa... you're real good, how about a sequel to it? :) |
| Clemen 2003-08-11 ch 6, anon. | abuseReally sweet. |
| sayin princess 2003-06-09 ch 7, anon. | abusei loved it! I wish it was really real! |
| sayin princess 2003-06-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseok, ok, i'll admit that Vegeta is a tiny bit out of character but it still is a good story and great writing style! |
| keikoutou 2002-12-20 ch 6, | abusevery sweet...love it!!!^-^ |