this was a really good story. you should try some qui-gon/dooku bonding stoies (non-slash). i think you would be good at those.

Wow! A great ending for an amazing fic. I must admit, I read it all in one day and was absolutely delighted, you did a great job :D

The ending was really sad though, I wish she hadn't died and everybody would have lived happily ever after (though it might be just me and my silly love for happy mushy endings).

:D

Awesome story! I'm sorry it took me so long to read and review this. My SW obsession took a bit of a hiatus, but anticipation of the DVDs has rekindled it a bit. I love your Dooku stories. Love em love em love em. I certainly hope that when you finish Eclipse, you start up another one.

Excellent work!! Great ending!! Poor Dooku... still feeling guilty over her passing. And Qui hehehe poor kid being stuck with Dias for a couple months *shudders* I don't know if I wanna know how that went!!

Poor Dooku... he's right though... the time of the Jedi is soon to be over and he knew and could sense it. I like ya portrayal of Jo ;) great work :D

Poor Alyaah. :'(

This chapter was so sad and heartfelt! Poor Dooku! He has nobody to comfort him! I'd offer my shoulder if I was there! :D

And I loved the added lyrics at the end! All to true that the words seem to fit.

Quick question... ;) Does your Dooku eventually fall for Jocasta Nu? ;) hehehe juz curious since it came out in a Star Wars Insider... can't remember which issue #, about how him and her supposedly had a relationship ;)

GREAT work once more! I am so enjoying your stories! And I love 'Eclipse' :D :D

YAY! :)

Nice chapter Jurious! I can't wait til the next one.

I'm so glad you updated. Has Qui-Gon finally found his master? I don't know! must have more!

OIOH NO NO NO YOU CAN'T END IT THERE!

*huggies Qui and Dooku and makes them better* Clifhanger?! Jurious! *cries*

Oh, but it was so very good! You write Dooku and Qui both spectacularly! And again, I always say it when I read this fic, Allyaah is SO cool! ^_^ I love her personality, and the dialogue with her and Qui-Gon is always done so well. Poor Dooku though!! Oh, please please please update soon!

Hey hey. I just started reading this story today and zipped through it in about a half hour. Really enjoying it, so how's about updating it? And, while we're on the subject of updating, how about doing the same for Eclipse, too? Huh huh? Pretty please? ;o)

Finally a new update all these years! (just kidding) Qui-Gon is still a sweetheart! ;) very nice chapters.

Oh wow! Updates! I thought I was hallucinating for a second when I saw new chapters in my inbox.. up late from cleaning and all :D Very glad to see that I wasn't! Poor Quiggs got sick. *rubs tummy in sympathy* Hehehe. Silent as a womp rat...silly Qui. Very well done. Characterizations are absolutely perfect. Poor Dooku :D Hope they rescue him in time. :D

Well lookie lookie! an update! Better late than never! Hehe I just love Qui-Gon's sense of humor.. very well written! Keep at it ;-)

NO!

*sobs madly and hugs lil' Qui, an Co* NO NO NO! Bad jurious, bad cliffhanger! Ack! please please please update soon! *whimpers* You can't just leave off like this... (sorry, perhaps I should have waited until I calmed down before writing this review.) Other than the cliffhanger, loved this part though. worth the wait. The writing was very well done, and characters perfectly in character. Good job! :D More please? Soon? Kill bugs? :D
~Jess :)