 Kaikura Tenshi 2004-01-04 . chapter 1Wow...that was a really good story! I liked it. It was short but to the point. I thought it was great when you had Kosh speaking, I've never been able to write for Kosh, it's so hard, but you did it wonderfully. The last line is a great ending too!
~Kai =^_^=
"Elric, I think I was asleep. If you wanted to jump into my bed, you could have asked first."
~Burell the Techno-mage in "Casting Shadows" |