Angel Fantasy 2008-10-12 . chapter 1 Who is the mysterious Saiyan ? Raditz ? No, he's been dead for more than 15 years... Turles ? Not likely. Brolly ? Not any chances. He wasn't even in Frieza'a army to begin with. Bardock ? ... He died in Planet Vegeta's destruction screaming Kakarott's name in despair, so I don't think his ghost is on Earth rigth now. So who...? |
btstfn 2007-08-13 . chapter 17Story is pretty good except for the part where zarvon gets all the super saiyan levels except 4 in a matter of seconds.also i am pretty sure when u gain control of golden oozaru that u automatically go into ssj4 |
A-man 2007-02-21 . chapter 11 Ok this chapter was great until the the zarvon thing...which really really SUCKED!...i aint reading this anymore...there was no explanation wut so ever. |
A-man 2007-02-21 . chapter 7 You most likely won't read this...but who cares...GOHAN already knew his dad could ascend...and you already SAID THAT vegita was able to ascend...you contradicted yourslef a 10 times so far...I have not even mentioned half of them...you alwasy forget wut you wrote in the chapter ebfore...its just soo wrong...you only rememeber the basic plot. |
miroku-has-darkness 2004-11-30 . chapter 14you made jesse to cocky and a show off |
C-Boyd 2004-10-07 . chapter 17Nice Story, it kept me entertained! Anyway, keep up the good work! And thanks for the review, a long long time ago. |
Trugeta 2004-04-27 . chapter 17A very good ending for a very good story. I will come back to r&r your other stories once I have got the time.
C ya! |
Trugeta 2004-04-27 . chapter 16Very good end to a very good fight. And you wrote before that you are not good at writing fighting scenes... Man, you rock! |
Trugeta 2004-04-27 . chapter 11Again a very good chapter I liked very much. But that was one hell of a power rush you gave Zarvon there. But shouldn't he have gone Super Saiyan 4 once he got control of his Oozaru form? |
Trugeta 2004-04-27 . chapter 8A good end to a good tournament. I really liked it. Now to the Majin Buu incident... |
Trugeta 2004-04-27 . chapter 6Very good chapter! Actually you're very good at writing fighting scenes, and the Videl-Gohan scene was brilliant! Good work! |
Trugeta 2004-04-27 . chapter 5I really like this story! And you ARE good at writing battles. I am interested in how the tournament goes on.
C ya! |
KyLewin 2004-03-12 . chapter 17Wow, this was a great story. I enjoyed it immensely BOTH times that I read it. |
Jordsan 2004-03-12 . chapter 17Yaho! Good story, good story, me likey, me likey! |
Knight's Shadow 2004-01-01 . chapter 17 Really good story.Awesome even. |