  Kenzay 2008-07-21 . chapter 1Your fillers are quite awesome :D I loved the ending! Awesome dialogue, and flawless characterization (as usual). It's so easy to imagine this really happening. Kudos!
Kenzay |
| MgcGurl 2008-07-01 . chapter 1 This is a really good story! I like all of your Mummy stories that I've read, but this one is my favorite so far. You really captured the characters personalities well. You should keep writing more stories, they're really good! |
| Luling 2007-10-20 . chapter 1 SO SO SO sweet!! OMG! I totally squealed when I read "And Rick O'Connell lost his heart." ^__^ It was absolutely fantastic!! |
| Canne 2007-02-02 . chapter 1 Just found this story, and I loved it! The dialogue is very well-written and some of your phrasing is truly brilliant. I particularly loved this passage:
Evelyn Carnahan, cloistered with her dusty books and her long-dead Egyptian nobility, had no interest whatsoever in voting or in going to jail. Her brother shouldered both of those responsibilities on behalf of the family, and that suited her perfectly.
Well done! |
| Rick +evie 4ever 2005-10-06 . chapter 1 Amazing fanfiction! i want to read more! i want to know what happens next! Dont stop now! |
| Rhinemaiden Number 4 2005-08-08 . chapter 1 Characterization is spot-on, your prose is divine, and the story flows so perfectly. Dang, this is perfection.
-MHIR |
| colorguard06 2005-07-28 . chapter 1 LOVELY!! I absolutly adore it! :-D |
| nightsiren02 2004-01-22 . chapter 1 This is a really great story...I so wish that you would continue. |
| Sonya 2003-11-13 . chapter 1 Wow, this one was quite lovely. And the ending was perfect! Wonderful job. :) |
| A. Windsor 2003-09-29 . chapter 1 aw adorable! I love the progression of their feelings. At the beginning he can barely stand her and at the end he's fallen in love.
Love it! love it! Love it! (multiply that times infinity)
Perfect characterizations...
Perfect dialogue...
Perfect tension...
Awesome job!
This is amazing! |
| Amalia Lupin (Too lazy to sign in) 2003-06-16 . chapter 1 hey hello
YOU ARE A GENIOUS! WOW I love YOU!
you are such an extremely talented writer...
wow... |
| AerinBrown 2003-03-27 . chapter 1 Adorable! I loved it to pieces. Rick is so the greatest guy in existance.
Or...nonexistance.
Anyway. Great work! Wonderful piece. Keep writing! |
| MaidM 2003-02-12 . chapter 1 That's sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good. they're the cutest couple! |
| Evening Nightshade 2003-02-07 . chapter 1 Excellent!
Your descriptions really help bring the story to life. The characterisation is flawless, and the dialogue is hilarious. You also seem to have a wide knowledge of Ancient Egyptian myths, which added to the story's authenticity. This almost seems like a scene that was cut-out of the movie. Well done! |
| katie janeway 2003-02-04 . chapter 1 Very sweet. :) |
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