WOW! Loved the story! Awesome job.

To add to my last review. An interesting love of furry aliens (Wookies, Ryn, etc...)

DARRA

:laughs: Charm isnt what comes to mind. More like distinctive personality and an odd amount of luck.

enjoying the story,

DARRA

Very interesting dialog use. It is very reminiscient of the written storys in terms of development and flow. I would recommend a tad bit more show vs tell, but other wise a very strong piece of work.

Loved the story, i like the way you ended it. I almost always feel sorry for Tahiri cause after SbS she didn't really seem to fit in anywhere. great Job!

you are such a great write. I wish I could write and good as you! Keep up the good work
all the best
jolly solo flyer

Very interesting I liked the ending adn you are a very good witer

SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL!

That was great! but i think it would have added to the story if you had put Leia's reaction to Jaina being pregnant.

Oh god, I read it all and it's absolutely awesome!

Please, another last last last chapter?

Are you sure that that's it? Are you going to do a sequal?

Fireyforce

AWW! I loved it. I wish it wasn't over tho...i can't get over how awesome that was! i guess you get the picture. It wass great. Thnx for a excellent read.

God bless,

Jaina

Sniff sniff. That was beautiful! And what a surprise at the end!

I liked very much your story.

*sniff sniff* i don't want the story to be over! wa!

i pressed the button, and i thought it was good. well done!