wow... 0_0
Im almost frightened...
Tis very good tho!

*Black Majik*

Dark, short and very well written!

I would however make a teenee-weenee suggestion -- if you don't mind, and er, well if you *do* have a protest against it then erm, its kinda a bit to late ^_^;

What I would suggest is that you write a summery for the fic that actually shows what will be in. The title is good, if it doesn't however quite fit with the ficlet. -- Perhaps use Harrys phrase? 'Try to take' or even 'best of me' would be a far more appropriate title. Please do not take any of the above suggestions at offense, I do think this is well written and it shows depth into the fact that not all allies are actually out for your own best interests.

I haven't heard L.Ps' song, in truth I'm not a big Linkin Park fan -- more Radiohead or J.E.M {I have odd tastes} Yet, it isn't that obvious that it comes from a song.

Woah... looks freaky, but very good. Do continue!

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK!

/bangz head against wall/


oh geezus! IT'S SO OBVIOUS IT'S FROM A SONG! should i put copyright...???