holy crap! that was short but wonderful! if you could futher the idea and perhaps create a more advanced plot, then you could... uh, rule the world? ^^U

>.< you have nine fics and only two are yuugi-ou?! *stabs things* okay, all better. *derranged look* ^_^ please write more!
-VT
Baku/Ryou Forever!

Okay, I kinda don't get it, but I probably will with some more chapters. I DO have a lfeeling that it will be a really nice fic. Waiting for your update.

Did you really need that article before 'tears'? And try using em lines instead of regular hyphens; Word autoformats them if you make two of them in a row, with no spaces.

*awkward silence*

Aheheh... Uh, sorry, falling into beta-reader mode is way too regular for me... Hee, remember when I was your beta-reader? Ah, those were the days--wait, actually, they weren't. Anyways, I'm flattered I'm mentioned in your profile (twice), heehee. This is the first time in MONTHS I've checked it >D

I would really appriciated it if you don't make this into a Yoai fic, I can't stand those. Anyway so far so good, Please update

argh how are u supposed to tell me to view ur reviews without reviewin my self?

i thinks its ok
i just kinda hoped you'd write more

Hey I like it! A littlw on the short side, but still very good! Can you make it a Ryou (Bakura) and Yami Bakura fic? Sorry if you don't like Yaoi, but I would really appreciate that pairing.

YAY!!! YOU'F BETTER CONTINUE!!! Oh, and I know I already said it....BUT MAKE IT A RYOU AND BAKURA FICCY!!!!!!!!!!

OooOOooo RoRo like... There be more for this? Well if not this does sum up alot, and makes alot more thought provoking. :) I like.

Wai! Can't wait to see where this is goin...well, i'll keep readin'! 'Till next time!

~Kiyo-chan

I really like the way you have captured the emotion in this, especially the last line, and you have a great idea here, I'm rather intrigued by it! This has alot of potential, but my advice to you is to consider the following: -
1) Try writing something alot longer... most people are put off by something so short. This would make a great opening paragraph, but on its own it's too brief for people to get into it.
2)I recommend sepearting your text up... block text is often another put-off (I certainly find it one).
3) You should present it with a clear title, and state that it's in Yami Bakura's P.O.V.
Also, perhaps you should be a little less vague on the coupling...I do hope you'll take what I've said into consideration becasue I would LOVE to see this turn into a great story, which I believe it could do with some more added! I hope you don't take this as a flame, because it is far from one! If you give me an e-mail at: celtic_guardian_gurly@hotmail.com I'd be happy to encourage you and help you along the way, because I'd hate to see an author with such potential give up because of a lack of attention! I can even help you think up a drawing summary ^_~ lol!
I seriously hope you don't give up on the idea!

Peace out and take care,
~Hwoarang Girl~
*^_~*

Hmm... it looks like it's gonna be a good one. :) Please continue!

please continue. I LUV BAKURA STORIES. this one looks like its going to be good.(even though it is kinda short