I liked it.

Great story

i've fead this story eight times everytime i get on the computer i emediatly look for it the best ond worstof times is by all means the best story i have ever read it really is!

best story ever can't get enough i've read it over 16 times i love it

I really, really like this story.. It's awesome. :)
You're a fantastic writer.!

i love it

I really like this story, I was a little sad that Hermione is now Mel, but i guess it's okay. I am a little confused about Chloe, but i'll most likely understand it better as i read. Good job!

This was a really good story. I enjoyed reading it.

I hate to say it, but this story has so many spelling mistakes that it's a bit tiresome to read, and also Hermione, renamed as Melody, is very uncharacteristic from the character she usually is. Maybe you should check the spellings of this story and maybe write the story a bit differently and not like this:

"Hallway, near the dining hall" and blaa blaa blaa

and then next:

"Dining hall, Slytherin entrance" blaa blaa blaa, let me tell you, it's very annoying.
The transition from one place to another could be written more smoothly, like: "after they were done eating, and the dinner was nearly over, Hermione along with Harry and Ron decided to head towards the Gryffindor common room. They finally arrived to the Lion's den after having walked a long way from the Great hall...blaa blaa blaa." I'm not really a writer myself, but that's how it's usually written. That example wasn't from your story, or any story, but it was written just to give you an example.

The plot is good, but still the writing style makes the story a bit boring.. sorry!
Anyway, good luck with your other writing projects, and hopefully you'll learn something from the comments given to you. :)

great story so far.

I truely loved this story! It was amazing. Especially how you worked in the books too! I haven't seen that done yet and you did it really well. I'm a little confused though... All those who were in the hospital wing with Peter...that slime... who were they. There was a James... but James came back. And Sirius Lupin? Serenity Snape? Caroline was Serenity Snape's mother. Please clear it up for me and i'll be eternally grateful. Wait... are they Sirius/Hermione, Remus/ect ect,'s kids from the future? I think... but i'm not sure. lol, confusing. (it's not ur writing, i can be an idiot when i haven't had any sleep. And i've stayed up all night to finish reading it. Great job, and keep em coming!

i love the code. very marauder, helpful, important as hell and funny.

YAY... lol... i absolutely loved that story... you lost me a little when hermione/melody came back to the future but i got it... anyways, i loved how you figrued out how to mix keeping her in the past and sending her back to the future... AMAZING story... (and yes i know i use ... way too much, but hey its my review)

i love your story so far, but i can't help but think that james, sirius, and remus are being mean to peter. i mean i know he goes bad in the end, but in this story i can't help but feel that maybe he has a reason. i personally wouldn't be friends with james and them if they treated me the same way as they treat peter no matter how cute they were. its just with the whole "transfiguration homework revenge" and getting mad at him and not hanging out with him, i feel sorry for him. and its just my personal opinion, and i do love this story so far.

luv it