I like the way how you described their feelings.
keep up the good work.

peace.

I definitely appreciate the perspective you got going here! The inability to touch, and act on what you feel...Not even the opportunity to, is a tragic notion indeed. Almost like your trapped within a cage, the iron bars made of control...yet not of your own. Truly, great take on the passionate pairs relationship. I translated what you wrote about the 'unknown force' to actually be the different aspects of the pair that prevented their union for so long. Such as Vegeta's unyielding pride(that's definitely an obstacle!). Well anyways, lovely view on the pair and awesome idea! Thanks for sharing ^_^

-Chelsea