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xxDeadlyKittyxx 2006-04-10 . chapter 1
Sobs!
U made it so sad!
Audley 2005-08-17 . chapter 1
Aw. This is so sweet. I'm glad you wrote a Kyoru at some point, even if it seems like you turned traitor and wrote a Yukiru a few months later...haha. Just kidding. ::grins::

Audley
Princess Blade 2005-03-21 . chapter 1
That was a beautiful, moving story. :) Very well-done. :D
Moonlit Rain 2003-08-23 . chapter 1
Beautiful! I love Kyou's affections for Tohru and you put it beautifully!
CookyButtButt 2003-08-09 . chapter 1
it's so beautiful, but so sad...
KitsuneNekoYoukai 2003-06-05 . chapter 1
So sad...::sniff:: I'm crying sorry but this is soo sad! WAH!
Bluedreamer 2003-01-08 . chapter 1
It's so sweet and sad :(
Raigeki 2002-12-09 . chapter 1
I read all of this and wish i was as d=good as you.
I know i'm not the romantic sort, but I wish i could at lease write the was you do.
All the feelings...So Sweet...
Well, I'm hopeing yu continue with your other fics, because i'll read them.
what used to be meemee 2002-11-30 . chapter 1
i finally have time to read this!!

anyhow, it was really sweet. kinda sad, but kinda not. ^^ but i liked it.

//meemee
totoro 2002-11-27 . chapter 1
~sniff sniff~ Kyou-kun's... leaving?! nooooo ~sniff sniff~ the fic is great ^^ ~tear~ poor kyou-kun...
Padawan Jan-AQ 2002-11-26 . chapter 1
awesome fic. :) :) :) :)
NaughtyRaccoon 2002-11-25 . chapter 1
beautifully written! kinda sad, though *sniffle*
LOVE WITCH 2002-11-25 . chapter 1
I love Kyou and Tohru stories i think they are the best suited couple.

Please please update and soon!
s' old fic 2002-11-24 . chapter 1
You know how I feel about Kyou... But to be fair, I think this is exactly how he feels about Tohru. You've nailed the character, Oneesama! Now if you'd do it literally. The nailing, I mean.

Kyou: You cut that out.
Me: Make me, stupid cat.
Serena B 2002-11-24 . chapter 1
Man, just when I thought I was over Kyouru this comes along. ^^;;;

Beautifully written. You've written Kyou's thoughts very eloquently, yet you kept him in character with his interactions with Tohru. It was a delicate balance, ne?

I really think that Kyou does love Tohru very much, but I think she'll end up with Yuki when all's said and done...if she ends up with any of them. Still, it's nice to read such a wonderful fic showing Kyou's feelings.
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