Well I can't speak for the others but this Graveyardshift Groupie loved it. :-) Great job, I hope you continue writing, you do such a great job that I can't hardly believe that English is not your first language. I know I could never write in a foreign language and I think you do a marvelous job at it.

That was really good! It was so cute, great job!

Wow... great job. I never would have known that you were Dutch if you hadn't mentioned it, I thought this was wonderfully written.

Ooh, that was cute. :) Are you going to write some more?

And no worries...I'm American, and 18, and love my spellchecker to death, but I spell things wrong half the time. I didn't /see/ anything...

awww that was sweet!! I like the doll analogy

This was a very nice story to find upon returning from a trip without internet access.

This is excellent. I loved it, please tell me that you are going to continue with this story. I hope you do. Your writing is great.

siighhh...so good.

~Allison~

I absolutely love the title. Don't get me wrong, the story is awesome, incredible even, too, but the title just gets to me. It's poetic, does that seem right?

Here's my usual 'demand': write more. soon. especially of the conversation or ... ::grins:: the after results... hmm. now that's a story!