Oy, well I guess you never continued this then. It certainly does look interesting, the juxtaposition of these separate timelines. Never seen any other fic with that idea.

Wow, I'm very impressed. The quality of Seto/Jou fics I've read so far in my life are usually pretty low, but this one is more than decent. You don't rush through your writing, fangirling all over the place, but actually take time to piece your words together. Sad that that deserves a wow these days, huh?

You're never gonna update, are you? I hate it when you author-type-people do that. It's terribly annoying. Especially when it's a good story line. You're annoying. *shakes head* Such a shame...

it's soo confusing ... the first part, it really happens and they went back to the orphanage or did it was just a : what if ??

I'm soo confuse

U shouldn't say that... u are a great author one of the best I have ever seen... very good plot u thought of... pls contiue...I'll love to see the ending of this fic... ^_^ ja ne!

I don't think this is confusing at all. It's really good, actually. Very well written and filled with nice bishie abuse angst. I love the way you show the alternate time lines. This is a very good, orginal idea, and it sucks that someone basically stole your story idea and didn't give you credit or anything. Poor you! Anyway, this fic is great, and I do hope you continue!

P.S. I don't know if you've gotten over your medical disease that sucks, but I hope you get better!

*sweat drops* All right, I'm done being an idiot now...

Um...*pokes author* I just found out about you...are you gonna finish this, because it's really, REALLY good...

I was confused, I won't lie. Had you not said that there were two different timelines, I would have stayed in my ball of confusion (though I would have kept reading anyway). I like how this fic compares and contrasts Seto and Jounouchi. I hope this little review will inspire you to write more (because you haven't written anything in over a year...)

wow~ cool idea!

you are worthy! *bows down before Sky* that's really good, and I think I actually understand it! I THINK it's that two things could have happened... and you're telling them both... one was all four got adopted, then the other is the Kaibas got adopted at Jou went to his biological father and Shizuka to her bio mother... I think. In any case, it's cool. and believe me, you aren't a 'crappy author'... you're much better than I am, at least... it's a refreshing change.

This is getting good, keep writing, i like storys about Setos' child-hood, even though i love him.

confusing, yea but i think i get it, it is both sites of the cross road od Seto's decision(sp?) please continue

yay!
seto/jou angst! i luv that stuff
update soon lol
*gives author seto/jou plushies*

This is just an idea, but you should seperate your timelines into two different stories.

So here I was, sitting harmlessly at my computer. Thinking to myself, "I should go read 'Fuse' again by SSJ Sky-chan." So I did. And then I checked the reviews and found I hadn't left one yet.
So naturally, my next thought was, "HOLY #@$%! I never reviewed this AMAZING (and kawaii) story! BLASPHEMY!"
So here ya go! ^_^; My crazy, fangirly review. I lurve this story! I think you have single handedly (between this and all your other stories) have converted me into a Seto/Jou shipper. Yay for you! More for the rabid fangirl soon! Onegai! ^_^;;

omagod!! omagodomagod! wow!! this story is...there is no word to describe how GREAT it is. update soon!

Jay:and stop saying you are a crappy autor. you are a VERY GOOD AUTHOR!

lucky:sorry. she is so evil sumtimes! update pleas!