Pretty good. Anymore stuff fomr u around like it?

Whoa, why don't ya just write VIII, IX, and X too! This is real good. I'd think it would be real hard to write all of the battle scenes, esp. since there are a lot coming up. But you're awfully creative and good at it, so I'm not worried. ^.^ I'd be glad to see a part 2, and even a part 3.

~EaT Me NoW or EaT Me LaTeR~

Aw... little tender Aeris/Cloud moment there *sniff* Anyway, overall twas great! *applause*

Whoo!! I'm liking this more and more as it goes on... Not many people can pull off decent battle scenes. And Hojo is so - ugh...

HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!! SO FUNNY!!!!
“Sure it will!  You’re Cloud, dammit!”/ “What does that have to do with anything?"/ “Nothing, I was just trying to boost your self esteem.” LOL, gotta love that bit... and the whole thing. Fantastico!

Wow, this must have taken a LOT of work! I don't always really like retellings, it's so easy just to write out the script without much else, but this is good!! Just - well told. Hehe, and I'm a sucker for just about ANYTHING with the original AVALANCHE in it....

I really like this i let u know what i think of it whne i finish!