I like your story. It a good story. Please keep writer this story. I think it go to be Ginny.

that was a great story but let me guess you're not going to up date are you?

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YOUR STORY IS SO GOOD!

very very good. can't wait to read more.

Very cool I like it alot.

Wait...this is confusing...you need to stick to one point of view, you switched from 3rd person to 1st and back again...

very nice and sweet. I would like it if you would continue on with this story. All and all a great start!
-Bennington's Girl-

i think it should be someone else and not Ginny rons little sister

Please! write more!
p.s. who's "me"?

Good, exept Harry and Cho go together not Harry anf Ginny.