 Kuro-C Inc. 2007-12-04 . chapter 2well the slight change is ok. but your chapter was very short... you can go far more into detail over many points in the story. i hope the next chapter is much longer. |
 Obnixus Patronus Tolerantius 2007-12-03 . chapter 2This is very interesting, I must say. An accident, and Ranma is seemingly terrified of something. This is very well written, please tell me you will update soon. |
 markeriv 2007-12-02 . chapter 2 Interesting to see where you are going with this... Can't wait till your next chapter. |
 Dumbledork 2007-11-29 . chapter 2You got me hooked. I need to know what curse Ranma got this time. It can't be the normal girl curse. |
 Sabayn 2007-04-09 . chapter 2I would like to see this story continued, It seems to have a direction at is not used very often or could easily new. |
 Slade13 2003-09-29 . chapter 1please continue
this story is pretty interesting so far.
it seems that ranma still becomes a girl but the question is how and why.
what is the truth behind the legend?
onigai, kinai-san
CONTINUE! |
 Kurai Seishin 1 2003-07-14 . chapter 1A good story. Almost as good as my Akane the Messiah bit. Shameless plug there. ^_^ |
 Slade13 2003-05-25 . chapter 2ack, want more, must have more. i likes.
please, continue! |
 nvus 2003-05-15 . chapter 2Ranma doesn't wan't to be a martial artist? Wow, Whatever happened musta been preety bad.
Update soon :) |
 SOME GUY 2003-05-13 . chapter 2 Wow...cool story...please continue it! |
 RAM 2003-05-08 . chapter 3 I will preread for you if you want me to...
Marker_iv@hotmail.com |
 chicken yelluh 2003-05-08 . chapter 3 I want some more! |
 Herb 2003-05-06 . chapter 2 please make complet sentaces. other then that work on grammer and it will be a prefect story. i hope to read more
~princess herb~ |
 Lu 2003-05-06 . chapter 2 Grammar, grammar, grammar.
Work on that, and you'll be half-way there. |
 TerraEpon 2003-05-06 . chapter 2Ugh. Some of this sounds like it was done by Babelfish. Is English not your first language? Even if true, that's no excuse for such sloppyness. If you couldn't get it to your prereder, don't put it up.
-Joshua |