|Reviews for The Pantheon|
| charliedoggie 11/25/02 . chapter 1
looks like you toned down the more poetic parts of the story and stuck to narrative... not that it's a bad thing though... it still came out rather nicely... especially the "talk" with asuka's mommy...
i'm still wondering how you're gonna pull a rabbit out of rei's and kaworu's "relationship" though... kinda freaks me out imagining the two of them together sometimes... *shudder*
| what used to be meemee 11/25/02 . chapter 1
omg...that was beautiful. i loved the different perspectives of all the different people. esp. asuka's dream with her mamie. and i also loved shinji.
am waiting eagerly for the next chapter.
| NoStyle 11/24/02 . chapter 1
ack this was so good. i absolutely love your style of writing, it has such a poetic and symbolic feel. this was a brilliant beginning.