I love your father and son cutness stories, its so awesome, I mean all I hear are Vegeta and Bura stories or Vegeta being abusive towards Trunks and THANK YOU for writting this wonderful story and all the others!

AW!! That was an amazingly sweet story. I loved that.
Bura is so evil, getting Trunks in trouble like that.
Shes still adorable though. Anyways i loved the story it was awesome!

~T-Bisqit

This story is really good. Good job! So are the others, BTW!

Very moving indeed! *sniff* How can you not be moved? The younger ones always seem to get away with everything. The older ones, like 'poor Trunks', just have to get on with it... I'm glad that Trunks found out Vegeta does care. ^_~ Great story!

WOAH! So good! I love it that Vegeta uses actions to show Trunks he cares since he doesn't use the words. This is so good.

that was excellent! 10 out of 10 please write more stories like that i love it! very talented writer here folks! whao

Now I want to kidnap them all. XD Very touching, I loved it. I like OOC Vegeta, he's so sweet. ^^

aw, this is deep. i love it. ciao:)

*sniff* That is the most beautifull thing I ever... *sniff*

Seriously, that was cute, I loved it, I have this great image of Trunks actually crying... rather odd...

I was really touched when Vegeta wouldn't let him go and he started sobbing. It was just really deep and powerful and the turning Super Saiyan was a great addition.
Well done.

OKAY IT'S OFFICAL I'M KIDNAPPING THE WHOLE FAMILY! MUHAHAHAHAHAH. That was the cutess thing ever!


peace,

awwww...that was sweet! Esp. the part when Vegeta told Trunks how much he cared! I was never one for sap...but i'm starting to get into it a lot now! And hahahaha that was so funny when Vegeta got mad a Bura! lol! That story was really good!

Awwwwww! That's so sweet.....! I liked it!

Wonderful. I love your writings.

*grin* that was great.