I-Love-Trunks1 2008-03-27 . chapter 12That was so good! I love it! Update soon |
Latin Girl Writter 2008-02-26 . chapter 12hey, are u alive?
this is one of the BEST stories i have read so far. I've read pretty much all of ur work, and it's great, but you haven't written since 2002! 5 years!
Please, if you are out there, at least try to finish this story. it is great. thank you. |
SiriusRulez 2007-11-17 . chapter 12That was so good! I just came across this story today and I think its really great! I really want to know why Trunks destroyed that planet and if their relationship gets patched up or if your ever going to finish it cause alot of good stories I come across are never finished and discontinued, so I was wondering if you could plz finish this off! plz post again soon |
Yaminokai 2004-10-26 . chapter 1great story! Just YOu think you could update or give a notice saying you quit with this after two years on no updates? |
Lily Violet Oak 2003-12-09 . chapter 12OH MY GOSH!! *claps so hard my hands hurt* This is one of the best stories I've EVER read! But I see that you haven't updated in a year, so I think I'm just gonna go in my room and sob uncontrollably into my pillow. PLEASE write more. Please! Also, I started by reading this fic, but then I decided to check out your others, and WOW! I want you to know that you have the honor of being the first person on my favorite authors list. Trunks and Vegeta stories are my favorites! Keep 'em coming! And thanks for some great stories. |
koumori wolf 2003-08-15 . chapter 1this has got to be one of the best Vegeta/Trunks bonding stories I've ever read!! I wish I could have found this story while you were writing it, and reviewed it then, but I just came across it today after reading For The Love of a Child, which by the way was GREAT, but to the point PLZ continue if u could, i'd love to know what happens, like why Trunks destroyed that monsters planet, and if Vegeta and him bond and all, and just about everything else.
~koumori wolf |
Rei6 2003-03-26 . chapter 12Okay, be warned - this review is going to be kinda loong. ^_~
First of all, excuse the pitiful english and I know I´m late, but I only found this story yesterday. And I so love it!! I haven´t read such an original and exciting and wonderful sappy story for quite a while now. Very good idea! I laughed really hard when all the Trunks had to deal with themselves at various ages - that was hilarious! ^_^
But now I´m biting my nails because I have to know how it will go on and why Trunks blew up this planet and if he and his father will ever get along and of course if there´s more wonderfull sappyness to come?
Second, I love Trunks/Vegeta bonding storys! I just melt in a big puddle of goo whenever I read a good one. (Don´t worry, I´m already checking all your other storys. ^_^) I think there are way too less, because all the storys dealing with them end up always depressing and with one of them dead. Please, please, say, you´ll continue this story! Puh-leeze! *makes big puppy dog eyes*
By the way, I added you to my faves authors list. ^_^
Can´t wait for more to come! |
Rei6 2003-03-26 . chapter 12Okay, be warned - this review is going to be kinda loong. ^_~
First of all, excuse the pitiful english and I know I´m late, but I only found this story yesterday. And I so love it!! I haven´t read such an original and exciting and wonderful sappy story for quite a while now. Very good idea! I laughed really hard when all the Trunks had to deal with themselves at various ages - that was hilarious! ^_^
But now I´m biting my nails because I have to know how it will go on and why Trunks blew up this planet and if he and his father will ever get along and of course if there´s more wonderfull sappyness to come?
Second, I love Trunks/Vegeta bonding storys! I just melt in a big puddle of goo whenever I read a good one. (Don´t worry, I´m already checking all your other storys. ^_^) I think there are way too less, because all the storys dealing with them end up always depressing and with one of them dead. Please, please, say, you´ll continue this story! Puh-leeze! *makes big puppy dog eyes*
By the way, I added you to my faves authors list. ^_^
Can´t wait for more to come! |
DBZ luver2 2003-03-20 . chapter 12hey, i was just wondering if you ever plan on finishing this story. it's been quit a while.
i really like the story so please contiue. or else i'll have to throw my copies away.
(yeah i know who would want to print this out?well me for one)
well good luck |
JJ 2002-12-28 . chapter 12 Hiya! I'm missing your updates!
I was wondering... will Vegeta be able to follow what future vegeta told him to do? Or he will need to learn to his own expences? For example he'll spank Trunks when he didn't deserve it pushing Trunks to lost faith in him and getting himself into serious troubles?
I'm saying that cause Vegeta is a reallys tubborn confident man and this sort of person doesn't change his ways easily... They need to bump their head in a wall for some times before realizing it's not worth it... I'm not saying Vegeta is stupid, just that old habits are hard to die and that one usually trusted them to be good so he's not going to be very inclined into changing them... |
Swimming Angel 2002-12-26 . chapter 1I just wanted to say again, that your story is soooooo good. Continue. And also, I'm really not a Vegita fan but a Trunks fan. And also, I always liked more than like people of the same family be in a story. Let Goku be in the story, and Gohan! You know? |
Swimming Angel 2002-12-26 . chapter 12 Hello!
That was sooooo good! I hope you update your story soon. It was really enjoyable! I really don't have any error comments about it. I write stories also! A DBZ one is called Bibidi Returns.
I hope you read it! |
Slytherin Rogue 2002-12-20 . chapter 2oh noooooooo!!!!!! |
Slytherin Rogue 2002-12-20 . chapter 1this is pretty good |
Ravenpan 2002-12-18 . chapter 12*chuckle* very very good.... |