I think you should write me a sequel to this, about whatVegeta says when he finds out what Piccolo did...lol, that'd be great. if you don't wan't to, that's fine. just e-mail me with your decision, okay? Thanks for the great read!

yeah, that would have been a good part of dbz, but i think both in the show and your story the boys got off too easy, especially trunks and i couldn't beleive how easy they got of in dbz, but i really liked your story. it's really great and intresting.

That was great!! I really like stories with Goten in it. Good job

I liked the story i think trunks should have gotton a wipping because poor little goten got one I liked how u expressed the characters with there charactiscs.

Very good. I agree with your idea, but I still think Goten and maybe trunks too got off a little too easy.

So Trunks got his fanny whacked. It's only fair. In the episode, all that happened was that he had to endure Bulma's first aide, while ChiChi gave Goten a spanking on his bare backside. I certainly would never want Piccolo mad at me.

awright Piccolo!!!! woohoo!!! I'da taken them over my knee too *nodnod* ;)

Hoi! Wow another cute fic! I love your fics! there really cute! good job! keep up the good work!

Lol! This was soo adorable! I wish Piccolo could have chibis...he'd make such a good father! Definately write more, I'm highly impressed with all of your fics! Keep up the great work!

YE-AH!! OH YEAH!!! THAT'S MY PICCOLO!! YOU DA MAN!! WHO DA MAN!!?? YOU DA MAN!!! ~Shakes fist violently in the air, like the true Piccolo freak she is~ BOOYA!!!

WOO! okay, that was fun. ^_^ That made me laugh from UTTER giddiness... ooOOoh, troublesome Trunks... he DESERVED that. ~Nodnodnod~ And it was cute, too. ~_^ Piccolo would make a grrrreeat dad. ^_^ ... Teeheehee!!! ^_^

... Uh... r-r... right... ANYWHO...

This was great!! Very enjoyable. ~Snickers a bit~ Little Goten, so easy to discipline. Of course we ALL know that deep down inside theres some evil little monkey waiting to surface, seething underneath that cute little Goku exterior!!!
... O... kay... you can ignore me now... heheh...

Cool story!
Just wondering... are you going to write a story in which Trunks get punished by Vegeta due to his partecipation to Adult tenkaichi Budokai? Or both the boys fet punished by Goku for not respecting him? Then Vegeta found out Kakaroth and Piccolo hurtef his son and kill them? ^_- Just joking!

That's just what SHOULD have happened.

awwwww cute ending! lol I wouldn't in a million years want piccolo's punishment! O.O my bottom would be broken in a million pieces by the time he were done! owch harsh! Trunks's attitude got him into even more trouble too! hey I wonder if Vegeta got spankings like that when he was little..... :p

I decided to review this because it's a shame that this fic doesn't have any reviews. It's really good. I've been reading all your fics, and I absolutely love them. You have a thorough grasp of the parent/child relationship, and it's adorable putting Vegeta, and even Piccolo, in parent roles. I know this is a review of all your work, but since your fics seem to liberally reference each other, this is fitting.

Until next time.