Holy crap this was an amazing piece of work. Like wow, just wow seriously. Without a doubt, this is both the most disturbing, pleasing and mind warping one shot possibly ever written for FFVII, maybe the entire site.

What even made you come up with something as wickedly twisted as this? Such an entertaining read that I'm sure caused nightmares for many, but that's a good thing because you really don't see amazing, highly controversial pieces like this posted often.

The sad part of it all is that although it isn't likely Cloud would ever do something like this, at the same time, it's not entirely out of his realm to follow through on it either because he was at many times during the game, portrayed as quite an unstable psycho with no clear morality in sight at times.

And as for Tifa, wow, just stooping down to that level because of her feelings for him. Again, I could totally see her doing that, but also not at the same time. Does that make any sense? If you ever get the chance to read this and have some time from that whacky genius brain of yours, give me a shout, I'd definitely be interested in talking to you about your stories and your fresh ideas.

Wow,just wow. In a good, great, I love macabre, way.

wow. i am totally impressed. awesome. okok a little bit disturbing...but that never hurt anyone!. ok wow...im speechless...totally. WOW!

I must say that I'm very impressed... This is the first fic of its kind that I've read and I must comment that it's very unique... Bloody brilliant!

Wow. That was extremely disturbing. Not meant in a mean way, but in a way where this piece is going to be lurking aorund in the back of my mind for the next couple of days. Just...it's really haunting. The writing was flawless, and the bitter vindictiveness of Tifa's voice is fitting. I just...I have no words.

Maybe you should eat less scones?

don't you just hate burnt scones? they taste so bitter! even after once being so sweet, they become a shadow of their former niceness. i like mine with butter, or jam. what about you? (also, i like the story)

Dear Sweet Cowboy Zombie Jesus. This has to be the most disturbing thing I've ever read and you're talking to a guy who has American Psycho and A Clockwork Orange in his favorite books list. It's so...so, so wrong but I couldn't stop reading it once I started. Part of me is greatly disturbed and yet the other wants to commend you for taking a chance and doing something so different.

You have a very extensive vocabulary, and very good use of imagery. You have a consistent style throughout.

However, some of your sentences are quite long and tedious. The one sentence that bothers me the most is "Right now you touch the tips of your index fingers together, concentrating on the imaginary stings of puppetry that bind skin on skin like peach-coloured tar." People's brains can't process that much information at once. Try breaking it up into shorter sentences, or shortening it. Don't make it more complicated than it needs to be.

Also, I don't agree with your characterizations. Cloud, maybe I can forgive you, depending on how much you think the events of the game (or the mako) affected him, and in what way. Tifa, on the other hand, is not the sex slave type. She is stronger than that. And smarter.

And, even though this has nothing to do with the story... Black Black Heart is Satanic?!?! You wuss :P

once again, you have bowled me over. you are talented and twisted beyond belief and this story only serves to proves just so. i also am a david usher fan, and i could not think of better lyrics to comlpiment this story. you have a knack for portraying mentally unsound characters that seem so unreal yet believable.

i hate you.

i loved this piece. it seemed so wrong and yet so right. many other fics try to convey tifa's distraught and cloud's obsession with aerith but you take the cake. you're the chocolate chip on my cookie. you sold me the idea.

bah. i will lurk in my corner and cry at my literary retardation.

Amazing work. Very dark, very disturbing...I loved it.

kool i love it .

Beautiful... it's absolutely brilliant!
What else can I say? A true art.

...WOW.

That was hauntingly... great.

Very dark, very sensual and chilling altogether. You have a knack for dark fiction, and I'm glad that you have put your talents to good use in this provocative Cloud/Tifa tale. The delusion is shattering and the general idea is twisted beyond compare.