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Noor1 2007-10-11 . chapter 1
*LOL* OMG! It's hilarious that Sai doesn't seem to be the least repentant about what he did with Hikaru's body XD
EmptyWord 2007-01-29 . chapter 1
"Um, it was really good go?" - Hahaha, okay you win my heart and soul and funny bone.

And my God, this is disturbing: "Why were there go stones in my shorts?" O.o I'm hesitant to admit it -is- kind of creative...

I would love to read a "serious" fic of yours.
Rambie 2006-10-22 . chapter 1
xD Lurve.
Kuzosama 2005-12-13 . chapter 1
=X i'm not usually into yaoi (i'm a guy!) but this rawks...
kari2500 2005-06-27 . chapter 1
yay~
i like the idea of Sai possessing Hikaru when he gets angry.
i also like the part where Sai is whistling

and it was all funny untill um... after touya's game.
bad touya. for being such a pervert.

i cant believe Sai was ok with it!
he was bribed with Go. lol.

oh, and when hikaru found out.
that was hilarious too.

Ja ne~

~ Kari ~
lin 2005-01-18 . chapter 1
nice story! i really like it
panatlantic 2004-03-04 . chapter 1
very cool fic ^_^ i'll leave it at that because i'm sure i reviewed it before...
kari 2004-02-13 . chapter 1
lol! nice story! poor Hikaru... well, maybe. I think he'll like the idea once he get use to it ^_^ lol! great fic!
eating-ramen 2004-01-25 . chapter 1
XD XD I don't know if I should congratulate Hikaru or cry for him... but this one is really really really one nice piece! I'll love you forever for this!
Cyril Avenue 2003-12-05 . chapter 1
I can't quite put it into words, but o.O XDD
Ayako 2003-11-09 . chapter 1
... ::cackles:: Geez, Sai. Ah, poor molested Hikaru.
keelhaul lizzie 2003-06-14 . chapter 1
Megumi: Lol! ^_^ Brilliant, absolutely brilliant.
Neph: M ... Touya. *pounce*
Megumi: *runs into a wall*
Cheska 2003-05-23 . chapter 1
ROFL! *stifles her laughs* Oye...Sai *shakes head laughing* Woah...I love that last part...
"Sai, why wasn't I at the concert last night? Why don't I remember anything? Why were there go stones in my shorts? Why is Touya calling me sounding-- needy?" His voice rose in pitch and intensity with each word. "Well? Sai?"
And I LOVE his response.. good go... lolz... *shakes head laughing again*
Dark Cyradis 2003-04-28 . chapter 1
Wah! That was hilarious! ^^ I love your cheeky exaggerations--the story flowed nicely as a parodic story! And Akira's "creativity" just had me rolling on the floor laughing. Fabulous stuff!
angstmuse 2003-03-08 . chapter 1
lol. very intersting ^^;
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