nice, nice job Aire. Especially liked the 'glass breaks' ending and how well you manipulated the mona lisa element and carol brady (hee!)into the story, very seamless and forceful. great piece!

You're a disease, you're a plague, you're a **, and you're sure as hell not my mother.

Owwww...good. Painful, but in a good way.

So grim! So harsh! But you gotta love it. Very well written.
BTW, what is the "cover me challenge"?

Brilliant. Just brilliant. Sydney's rage towards her mother is realistic and that line-'you're a disease, you're a plague, you're a **, and you're sure as hell not my mother.'-WOW.

BTW, it'd be great if you wrote something like this from Jack's point of view. If Sydney's this bitter, think what Jack must be like. *hint, hint*

*Sigh* Very powerful, Aire, and very well done. You've got loads of talent and it shines here :)

I'm a bit jealous...I'd love to be able to write like that ;)