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| Jess 2002-11-27 ch 1, anon. | abusenice, nice job Aire. Especially liked the 'glass breaks' ending and how well you manipulated the mona lisa element and carol brady (hee!)into the story, very seamless and forceful. great piece! |
| Celli 2002-11-25 ch 1,  | abuseYou're a disease, you're a plague, you're a **, and you're sure as hell not my mother. Owwww...good. Painful, but in a good way. |
| Joy3 2002-11-25 ch 1, | abuseSo grim! So harsh! But you gotta love it. Very well written. BTW, what is the "cover me challenge"? |
| sarah 2002-11-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseBrilliant. Just brilliant. Sydney's rage towards her mother is realistic and that line-'you're a disease, you're a plague, you're a **, and you're sure as hell not my mother.'-WOW. BTW, it'd be great if you wrote something like this from Jack's point of view. If Sydney's this bitter, think what Jack must be like. *hint, hint* |
| Angela Evans 2002-11-25 ch 1, anon. | abuse*Sigh* Very powerful, Aire, and very well done. You've got loads of talent and it shines here :) I'm a bit jealous...I'd love to be able to write like that ;) |